| "Falling for the Enemy." Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 23:00 CDT
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Ok, so Inuyasha dies and they had 2 kids. The part where Naraku pins Kagome to a rock is the future, correct? I think I understand.. Where is the link to this yahoo group? I would like to see the fan art. :) If you could email the link or simply give a public annoucment, that would be great. I'll be starting school soon as well so I know the feeling. Good luck and don't fall behind on our account. Take your time.
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Title: Falling for the Enemy
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter.
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Title: Falling For The Enemy
Reviewed By: SaggiBabii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far please update it great. who will she fall for thets my ques. great creativity.
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Reviewed By: Nullius in Verba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, having read Kilala's fiction I can see the resemblance, however somehow her fiction flows much better. You write well enough, and aside from a few minor spelling errors you're set there. Something is still missing though. I think it might be the balance of lemon/non-lemon- leaning a bit too much on the former and not enough on the latter. Try having longer stretches of plot development (without lemons) between lemons. Just a thought.
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life NSI On: July 11, 2006 19:26 CDT
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Congratulations on your engagement! I came here on a recommendation from the IYFG. Wow...NarKag...I never thought that it could seem so real! And the way you write it...I'm not exactly pleased with Naraku's current behavior but I guess I'll see where the story goes. Good job! Adding this story to my favourite stories list...update soon! Happy Writing!
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 20:58 CDT
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I'm enjoying your story and look forward to the next chapter. Congradulations on your engagement! And good luck with summer classes. ^_^
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Reviewed By: tigrlady On: June 28, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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umm...confused. please continue
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Reviewed By: Kagome-sama9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 14:17 CDT
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is......is kagome going to be okay???? Is she and inuyasha ever going to see eachother again? *Cries* DAMN YOU NARAKU!! DAMN YOU!!!
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have never thought of reading a K/N fic, ever. But the promise of reading a well written story sucked me in. It, in fact well written. I find myself liking this story very much.Keep up the good work. I'm curious how it will turn out. I'm only up to chapter 3.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 16:14 CDT
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Congradulations! w00t for you! And wonderful chapter, I'm sure we've all been waiting patiently ^_^. I sure have. Thanks for the chapter, it was great as always!
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Title: Good chapter
Reviewed By: ~Kilala81 On: March 25, 2006 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting plot. Not a lot of people bring politics into fics or understand much about Japanese history. I have to admit I love listening to InuYasha and Kouga when they're together. I hope you add in some Sango/Miroku plot, even if it's not romantic. Naraku's such a dark fun character to write. More people should try it! lol Hope you find time to update again soon, but hey, I understand more than anyone how easily real life can take over and keep you busy.
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Title: Well done
Reviewed By: Vaudeville [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was quite well written. Don't listen to that crap about "too much detail." Attention to detail shows affection for what you write. (Or at least some kind of OCD/Pathological Perfectionism.) I really enjoy this fic. Please continue. ....Please.
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Reviewed By: kagomevegas On: March 18, 2006 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy love the story the only problem I found is yes you have great details but somtimes a littel over board but other than that you are a very good writer and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that you keep going with your exelent plot well got to go Ja Ne KayC
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: AW555 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 21:54 CST
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I loved it! I love all Naraku stories cause he's just so darn shmexy but I really enjoyed this one. Nice plot, it's readable, and it's got lemons. What more could a reader ask for? Can't wait till the next update!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: March 16, 2006 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the most interesting and awesome stories i have ever read...great job! i cant wait until you update
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