| "Lace and Strawberries" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: Gifted ....
Reviewed By: Ishanatur On: November 06, 2008 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... thats what you are. In such short chapters you manage to evoke such feeling that I have physical as well as emotional reactions.
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Reviewed By: roxxihearts [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sasuke is so effed up....but i suppose it matches how he is ^^; wow naruto is so much more...-waves hands around trying to find the right word and fails- idk. but it was certainly awesome to read =) my favorite line was when he was like 'Him. Her. Whatever.'
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is extremely kinky but really good!
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Title: OMG IT WAS GREAT!!!!
Reviewed By: Lil Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! PLZ CONTINUE WRITING I mean those were onshots you could actually start a story line where naruto isn't oc-ish! plz! Cause I would love to know what happens! I've read all your stories so just call me your #1 Fan!
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Title: You make my world go round!
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man i love your stories !!! i feel kinda like a pedo for reading about 13 year olds But i guess pretending they are older works too =3 GREAT JOB
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Title: hottie~
Reviewed By: kaesaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic's hot! creative & really sexy~ i love naughty naruto.. ;p
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Title: Saki/Sasuke
Reviewed By: mikoamaya-hikari On: March 28, 2007 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was on ff.net reading a story by iamNOTafangirl3221 when I noticed that many of the reviews made a reference to Saki-chan being in a different story and then I found your review and looked you up! I realyy like this fic and almost gave it an overall rating of 10 but I thought to myself that if Naruto and Sasuke finally quit their charade and fell in love as Naru-chan and Sasu-kun, this would DEFINITELY be a 10 out of 10, more like a 20...however this last chapter was almost a SasuNaru so it's a 9 out of 10 instead! I hope you continue this story! Ja ne! ~You're right, iamNOTafangirl3221 should give you credit for the idea. I thought it was hers and praised her on her originality! Or is it a him? Whatever, iamNOTafangirl3221 was still wrong to lead people on like that!~
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Reviewed By: IC On: October 11, 2006 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Saska probly would make a pretty girl
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: June 22, 2006 02:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Omg, this is so awesome! How'd you learn to write so well? Everything is a straight 10! Seriously, this story flows.
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Reviewed By: nicha On: May 02, 2006 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's going on?! i find this sort of creepy, but cool... sortta...
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Reviewed By: queen of death On: December 04, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are totally amazing!please, right more!you should add another kinky scene with this "new" sasuke. i like your characters here, i don't think they are OOC at all. please, more kinkiness!woho!more hard-loving stuff!
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Title: Awwww ^_~
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
At first I was laughing my ass off to see Sasuke all girled-up, and have Naruto get all into it, but it got sweet, seeing Naruto want to protect "Sari-chan" and how in the end Sasuke kinda found a way to be both people at once..... GO NARUTO!!! WHOOT!!! Hahaha, ^_^
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Reviewed By: chelisha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I happened to like this fic so far. It has a certain, well, a certain feel to it that many lemon/lime fics dont have. I also liked how each character stayed pretty much in line too. I look foward to the next and upcoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: marna43@aol.com On: October 03, 2005 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! ooh! i don't know if you do requests! but could you write a hayate with someone preferably genma or kakashi or BOTH if you need any inspiration here is some cool lovely pictures http://jiisutsu.piranho.com/seite/gallery/yaoi/genmaxhayate/genmaxhayate20. htm http://jiisutsu.piranho.com/seite/gallery/yaoi/genmaxhayate/genmaxhayate19. htm http://jiisutsu.piranho.com/seite/gallery/yaoi/genmaxhayate/genmaxhayate18. htm they are really good!!! so PLEASE it would be cool if you made a fic on them ...hayate in a dress *aww! ^_^* email me if you write a story PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! i think sasuke is extremely well written. naruto's okay, but like you said he's a little oc. no biggie though, i wasn't put off by it. naruto is sexy when he's acting forward. hehe. i think i might take you up on that "adult saki" challenge...
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