| "Realization" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Morbid_angel On: July 04, 2005 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderful, I love the sterial aspect that you added. it was great. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope to see it soon.
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Reviewed By: KaGaShA0101 On: July 04, 2005 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked the storie, keep up the good work, dont let the dumb readers bully you. lol. by the way you spoke after one of the chapts id say thats easy to ignore lol, lata
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it -update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyashas_truefan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i cant wait to see what happens next i love your story so far
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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really really love your story! I can't wait to read the next chapter. You are doing an excellent job. Keep up the good work. Please put the next chapter in soon. PLEASE!!
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Title: Realization: Secrets Slip and the Truth is Told ( Chapter 14 )
Reviewed By: KireiChan* On: June 05, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! I TOTALLY LUV THIS STORY! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!? i am dying to find out when inu/kag will have sex lol and i also want to know is will Miroku except Sango's appology? OH PLEASE UPDATE! i want to know! LOL! e-mail me at Kerochankawaii@msn.com once u update pwease! yOuR faN, KiReI cHaN*
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Reviewed By: kitty1990 On: June 04, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story! LOVED IT! It's so sweet and romantic. I can't wait to read what happens next. So put the next chapter in. You're doing a great job. Your story is the best story I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey write how you wont I love it and can not wait till the next chapter will is be a lemon ?
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 12:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it dont listen to the idiot dickwad that is notloggedon fucking retarded bastard no one can see his name! and your story is different and kagome is different cuz this is a fanfiction not the real thing that fucking idiot should just shut up! your story is really awesome ignore the asses.......... lots of love please update
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 02, 2005 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
thus far im really liking your story. yes the characers are a little ooc, but that doesn't bother me much. very nice work! keep it up and update again soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:47 CDT
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Responding to the Chickenshit reviewer: Reviewed By: not logged in right now On: May 31, 2005 12:59 CDT No one sees your name or your fanfic posted here. It's called fan fiction for a reason. If everyone's shit was the same it would be boring. At least she posts stories and isn't a half-assed chickenshit flamer. Phantomflame, you're great. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
bwahahahahaaaa! and the story unfolds! Good job.
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Reviewed By: not logged in right now On: May 31, 2005 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kagome is really mean to Inuyasha throughout this whole story. That's not how she acts in the anime or manga. She has a temper, of course, but most of the time she's nice and understanding to everyone. You've made her a very selfish character in your story which is not how she acts in the anime and manga. And why did she and Sango get mad at Miroku and Inuyasha when they went to the sauna? They didn't do anything wrong. You gave no reason for Sango and Kagome's anger except that the village women were peaking at them, in which case they should have been angry at the village women and not Inuyasha and Miroku. You have not made Kagome a likable character in this story at all and I feel sorry for Inuyasha at the way she treats him. She hits him when he's injured and yells at him. That's not how Kagome's charater would act. She lets him give her pleasure then gives him nothing in return. She's completely selfish and reading about it is not enjoyable and I don't think I'll read this story anymore.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: May 31, 2005 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow.....nice work, very well done. update again soon plz?
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