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Reviewed By: kitty1990 On: June 04, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story! LOVED IT! It's so sweet and romantic. I can't wait to read what happens next. So put the next chapter in. You're doing a great job. Your story is the best story I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey write how you wont I love it and can not wait till the next chapter will is be a lemon ?
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 12:45 CDT
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i love it dont listen to the idiot dickwad that is notloggedon fucking retarded bastard no one can see his name! and your story is different and kagome is different cuz this is a fanfiction not the real thing that fucking idiot should just shut up! your story is really awesome ignore the asses.......... lots of love please update
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 02, 2005 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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thus far im really liking your story. yes the characers are a little ooc, but that doesn't bother me much. very nice work! keep it up and update again soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:47 CDT
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Responding to the Chickenshit reviewer: Reviewed By: not logged in right now On: May 31, 2005 12:59 CDT No one sees your name or your fanfic posted here. It's called fan fiction for a reason. If everyone's shit was the same it would be boring. At least she posts stories and isn't a half-assed chickenshit flamer. Phantomflame, you're great. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:43 CDT
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bwahahahahaaaa! and the story unfolds! Good job.
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Reviewed By: not logged in right now On: May 31, 2005 12:59 CDT
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Kagome is really mean to Inuyasha throughout this whole story. That's not how she acts in the anime or manga. She has a temper, of course, but most of the time she's nice and understanding to everyone. You've made her a very selfish character in your story which is not how she acts in the anime and manga. And why did she and Sango get mad at Miroku and Inuyasha when they went to the sauna? They didn't do anything wrong. You gave no reason for Sango and Kagome's anger except that the village women were peaking at them, in which case they should have been angry at the village women and not Inuyasha and Miroku. You have not made Kagome a likable character in this story at all and I feel sorry for Inuyasha at the way she treats him. She hits him when he's injured and yells at him. That's not how Kagome's charater would act. She lets him give her pleasure then gives him nothing in return. She's completely selfish and reading about it is not enjoyable and I don't think I'll read this story anymore.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: May 31, 2005 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow.....nice work, very well done. update again soon plz?
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: Jebus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 15:59 CDT
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Very naughty. I like the intimate moments between the characters. The talking, admission of feelings. All of it. Pretty good.
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Title: loving
Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 07:28 CDT
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I LOVE IT!!!!! KAGOME HAS POWER OVER INUYASHA HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! ITS GENIUS!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omfg i'm signed in too!!! keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: wow.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 04, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would be so embarresed if my mother came in like that! kepe up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: absm On: May 02, 2005 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is good but I noticed that the first chapter contains the same stuff in your other fan fic called Ougon Hoshi High. The first chapter of this story is the same for the first chapter of that story. So yeah. Anyway, great story.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 28, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hummm.... i wonder what there gonna do tonight!! ^__^ *wink wink* lmao keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: awww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a cute begining!!! keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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