| "HOUSE OF VEGETA" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: pandorahomerus On: November 26, 2001 10:18 CST
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Yes! Cool that you can recognize it as such! Although the story is going to be a lot more violent. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 04:06 CST
Comment/Review:
is this kind of like gormengast? |
Reviewed By: trunks admirer On: November 25, 2001 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Member me? I was 2 lazy 2 go no2 ff.net so i used the link u sent me...this site is cool. well, ne ways( really don't feel like usin grammar and proper punctuation) great job once again..keep me posted^_~. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: November 25, 2001 12:55 CST
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Wow! This one is really interesting! I totally can't wait to read more, so get writing!!! *giggle* Great start, I feel so bad for poor Vegeta... |
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle On: November 25, 2001 11:03 CST
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Hehe, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Sley [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 14:15 CST
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well...i liked it very much so far..!You write good and the story is also interesting..
the only thing you possibly could make is to leave a bit more space in the text iteslf..you have some passages that are really pulled together...otherwise it would be easier to read..
but that is only an advice and you do not have to follow it..*smiles*
but please continue..i would like to read how this continues...
sley |
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