| "HOUSE OF VEGETA" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: kodachi On: August 12, 2003 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder why you aren´t writing anymore. Or did you and I´ve just not found it? But I looked at your homepage...
Anyway I really like your story. You have your own unique way of creating suspense and keeping it. The way you write and characterize those persons acting is fascinating and I would really like to know if you ever go on or if you´ve lost interest in this fanfiction.
Please email me and tell me about any further progress of the story(?). I would appreciate it greatly.
-kodachi-
clautschy@web.de |
Reviewed By: Tama On: November 18, 2002 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this book is wonderful! I've read it a few itmes, (but this is the first time I've rated the story....)OHHH, PLEASE have the rest of "A TWIST OF FATE" out soon! I can't wait 2 read the rest of it!! ^_~ * Everything in the stary is GREAT, the detail, characters, grammar, everything! |
Reviewed By: am_raditz On: November 13, 2002 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good Fan fic i want more and the 2nd book when it will be I want to know what happen to Vegeta !!!! |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: September 09, 2002 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. that's all i can say. i've been watching dbz for about 5 months now and ever since the beginning , VEGETA has been my fsvorite. This book is great.i love it. keep it up and hurry, i'm anxious to resd more |
Reviewed By: niroby On: July 19, 2002 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
mmmmmmm.....chapterlicious |
Reviewed By: lovestruck On: June 22, 2002 20:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm telling everyone about this story!!!!!!! Don't quit! it's steller!! |
Reviewed By: catwomen On: June 22, 2002 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh........I have been waiting since December for the next part!!!!! Please don't give up on this story!!!!! It is excellent writing....plllleeeaaaasseeee get the next chapter up soon!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LinaMX On: June 16, 2002 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Where are you? I waited soooooo long for a new chapter(I read this ficcy in December)! How could you do this to me?*tears running down cheeks* |
Reviewed By: Foolish Sobber On: June 05, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story so fare. I am anxious to see what happens next. The story was so detailed! ^^ I am really looking forward to the new chapters. The last chapter was the best. It was the only one that made me cry. O.o |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to finish? I am hoping that you do, I really would like to finish this story. Nice Plot. |
Reviewed By: Phantom On: March 14, 2002 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAVE YOU DIED?!!! Write more, you've not written a word since, like, Halloween! YOU HAVE to contimnue this, it's driving me INSANE!!! |
Reviewed By: ME On: February 17, 2002 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEE, SEE - I gave you straight tens! Now while we're still alive, make another chapter, it's killing me! You've just stopped! AHHHHH!! MORE, MORE, MORE! |
Reviewed By: vegeta_gurl On: February 01, 2002 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Very original.......you better get the next part up soon cuz this cliffhanger is driving me crazy!!!!!!!keep up the excellent writing!!!! |
Reviewed By: scarjo On: January 24, 2002 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story. However I think you would have been better off just creating your own characters in the Dragonball world. This would have been a great prequel before Freiza ruled the Saiyans. This could have led up to why he at first didn't destroy them. Just my thoughts, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: careb On: January 20, 2002 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very good book, with interesting use of the DragonballZ charecters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'll definately visit this site again. Thanks for keeping me entertained for a few hours. See you later. |
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