| "HOUSE OF VEGETA" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Juu=Chan On: January 10, 2002 13:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic totally rules. You're writing style is really good, I feek for that poor Vegeta... I'm also a total fan of Vegeta, so... Well anyway, keep up the good work, or in Dutch, ga zo door! |
Reviewed By: panchan On: January 04, 2002 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm if u would like to know i think u should do a story about bulma being vegeta's slave, him taking over earth and the saiyans taking the women as slave make it lemon, and let there BE RAPE please please we love rape yes we do, we need rape Lmao |
Reviewed By: D-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay! Finally an AU that I like!
Style: You have very nice wording. It's not all choppy like in some fics.
Grammar: You could have broken up the paragraphs a little more, but there were very few mistakes.
Originality: I've seen fics a bit like this, but you were still able to make this original and fun to read.
Enjoyment: I like it!
Overall: A 10!
~D-chan
Email: AlloraColleen@aol.com |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: January 02, 2002 13:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh man! Poor little Vegeta! He's sick and alone and almost drowned and aaagh! And Piccolo's figured out who he is! Well, sorta...Great chapter though, I can't wait for the rest, I'm totally captivated by this fic! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 26, 2001 14:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohhh, poor Vegeta...he's so hungry and alone and sick...and that fishman...ewwww...Great description with him though, all his insane scratching and gross-ness...I can't wait till the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 23, 2001 19:05 CST
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Oooohhh...Poor little Vegeta! That's so awful!!! I feel so bad for the little guy...But I'm happy to see Dodoria beaten like the sack 'o crap he is...As usual, excellent chapter! I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Yasai Oujo On: December 20, 2001 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good so far with the fourth chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more, but yeah... Very interesting, I hate those cliffhangers, ya know? Whatever, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 16, 2001 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this fic just keeps getting better and better. Your description and the way you convey emotions and the thoughts of the characters is just amazing, and I'll be on the edge of my seat until the next chapter is up! |
Reviewed By: Milana On: December 16, 2001 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS SO SAD!!!! *sobbing* And you know what made it worse???? I'm listening to the song 'Everything's gonna be alright' by Sweetbox. That song fits the situation perfectly...and all of it added together made me cry! Well, anyway, bravo on another great chapter! |
Reviewed By: gokoi_son [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2001 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Pan-chan, great fic! Can't wait til you wright more. Are we going to be seeing much of Goku in here? I'd like to see him all prince-like.
-Lisa, aka Gokoi |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: December 03, 2001 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, thanks so much for the link to this story althought PLEASE use the BCC option in your Chapter notification e-mails in the future. The style of the A/U is very attractive and I'm enjoying the lay-out of the plot line enormously. There are a few problems with an original fanfic like this that you have to consider; Remember that this is a alien planet with different customs and odd flora and fauna. Your explanation of the architecture was excellent and original, as was the addition of the 'luppers' I just wish that you could have carried that further then talk about frogs, crickets and little girls with pig-tails- I doubt that there was a similar evolution of such things on as violent a world as Vegetasei. The other observation were some spelling and tense errors, nothing serious: limb/limp, mistrusting/distrusting, loss/lost...stuff like that. Certainly nothing that really distracted from the overall flow of the story. I gave this fanfic a "9" for a reason, I'm enjoying it very much and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (You're not REALLY gonna chop off Chibi Vejita's little hand, are you?) Guess I'll have to wait and see like all of the others. Good job so far, Pan! |
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle On: December 02, 2001 18:13 CST
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Oh god. Poor thing, I do see the pretense for rage. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 02, 2001 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my...that was a very very evil cliffhanger...My god, poor Vegeta...I feel so sorry for him! He won't really get his hand cut off, will he??? |
Reviewed By: Milana On: November 28, 2001 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good and awesome and...OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH...I LOVED it! |
Reviewed By: dbz27 On: November 26, 2001 21:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey...I haven't seen a story like this one....I LIKE it!!! Update soon cuz I want to see what happens to Vegeta!!!! |
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