| "HOUSE OF VEGETA" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yasai Oujo On: December 20, 2001 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good so far with the fourth chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more, but yeah... Very interesting, I hate those cliffhangers, ya know? Whatever, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 16, 2001 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this fic just keeps getting better and better. Your description and the way you convey emotions and the thoughts of the characters is just amazing, and I'll be on the edge of my seat until the next chapter is up! |
Reviewed By: Milana On: December 16, 2001 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS SO SAD!!!! *sobbing* And you know what made it worse???? I'm listening to the song 'Everything's gonna be alright' by Sweetbox. That song fits the situation perfectly...and all of it added together made me cry! Well, anyway, bravo on another great chapter! |
Reviewed By: gokoi_son [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2001 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Pan-chan, great fic! Can't wait til you wright more. Are we going to be seeing much of Goku in here? I'd like to see him all prince-like.
-Lisa, aka Gokoi |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: December 03, 2001 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, thanks so much for the link to this story althought PLEASE use the BCC option in your Chapter notification e-mails in the future. The style of the A/U is very attractive and I'm enjoying the lay-out of the plot line enormously. There are a few problems with an original fanfic like this that you have to consider; Remember that this is a alien planet with different customs and odd flora and fauna. Your explanation of the architecture was excellent and original, as was the addition of the 'luppers' I just wish that you could have carried that further then talk about frogs, crickets and little girls with pig-tails- I doubt that there was a similar evolution of such things on as violent a world as Vegetasei. The other observation were some spelling and tense errors, nothing serious: limb/limp, mistrusting/distrusting, loss/lost...stuff like that. Certainly nothing that really distracted from the overall flow of the story. I gave this fanfic a "9" for a reason, I'm enjoying it very much and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (You're not REALLY gonna chop off Chibi Vejita's little hand, are you?) Guess I'll have to wait and see like all of the others. Good job so far, Pan! |
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle On: December 02, 2001 18:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh god. Poor thing, I do see the pretense for rage. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 02, 2001 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my...that was a very very evil cliffhanger...My god, poor Vegeta...I feel so sorry for him! He won't really get his hand cut off, will he??? |
Reviewed By: Milana On: November 28, 2001 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good and awesome and...OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH...I LOVED it! |
Reviewed By: dbz27 On: November 26, 2001 21:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey...I haven't seen a story like this one....I LIKE it!!! Update soon cuz I want to see what happens to Vegeta!!!! |
Reviewed By: pandorahomerus On: November 26, 2001 10:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes! Cool that you can recognize it as such! Although the story is going to be a lot more violent. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 04:06 CST
Comment/Review:
is this kind of like gormengast? |
Reviewed By: trunks admirer On: November 25, 2001 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Member me? I was 2 lazy 2 go no2 ff.net so i used the link u sent me...this site is cool. well, ne ways( really don't feel like usin grammar and proper punctuation) great job once again..keep me posted^_~. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: November 25, 2001 12:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! This one is really interesting! I totally can't wait to read more, so get writing!!! *giggle* Great start, I feel so bad for poor Vegeta... |
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle On: November 25, 2001 11:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hehe, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Sley [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 14:15 CST
Comment/Review:
well...i liked it very much so far..!You write good and the story is also interesting..
the only thing you possibly could make is to leave a bit more space in the text iteslf..you have some passages that are really pulled together...otherwise it would be easier to read..
but that is only an advice and you do not have to follow it..*smiles*
but please continue..i would like to read how this continues...
sley |
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