| "HOUSE OF VEGETA" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: catwomen On: June 22, 2002 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh........I have been waiting since December for the next part!!!!! Please don't give up on this story!!!!! It is excellent writing....plllleeeaaaasseeee get the next chapter up soon!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LinaMX On: June 16, 2002 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Where are you? I waited soooooo long for a new chapter(I read this ficcy in December)! How could you do this to me?*tears running down cheeks* |
Reviewed By: Foolish Sobber On: June 05, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story so fare. I am anxious to see what happens next. The story was so detailed! ^^ I am really looking forward to the new chapters. The last chapter was the best. It was the only one that made me cry. O.o |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to finish? I am hoping that you do, I really would like to finish this story. Nice Plot. |
Reviewed By: Phantom On: March 14, 2002 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAVE YOU DIED?!!! Write more, you've not written a word since, like, Halloween! YOU HAVE to contimnue this, it's driving me INSANE!!! |
Reviewed By: ME On: February 17, 2002 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEE, SEE - I gave you straight tens! Now while we're still alive, make another chapter, it's killing me! You've just stopped! AHHHHH!! MORE, MORE, MORE! |
Reviewed By: vegeta_gurl On: February 01, 2002 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Very original.......you better get the next part up soon cuz this cliffhanger is driving me crazy!!!!!!!keep up the excellent writing!!!! |
Reviewed By: scarjo On: January 24, 2002 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story. However I think you would have been better off just creating your own characters in the Dragonball world. This would have been a great prequel before Freiza ruled the Saiyans. This could have led up to why he at first didn't destroy them. Just my thoughts, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: careb On: January 20, 2002 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very good book, with interesting use of the DragonballZ charecters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'll definately visit this site again. Thanks for keeping me entertained for a few hours. See you later. |
Reviewed By: Juu=Chan On: January 10, 2002 13:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic totally rules. You're writing style is really good, I feek for that poor Vegeta... I'm also a total fan of Vegeta, so... Well anyway, keep up the good work, or in Dutch, ga zo door! |
Reviewed By: panchan On: January 04, 2002 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm if u would like to know i think u should do a story about bulma being vegeta's slave, him taking over earth and the saiyans taking the women as slave make it lemon, and let there BE RAPE please please we love rape yes we do, we need rape Lmao |
Reviewed By: D-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay! Finally an AU that I like!
Style: You have very nice wording. It's not all choppy like in some fics.
Grammar: You could have broken up the paragraphs a little more, but there were very few mistakes.
Originality: I've seen fics a bit like this, but you were still able to make this original and fun to read.
Enjoyment: I like it!
Overall: A 10!
~D-chan
Email: AlloraColleen@aol.com |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: January 02, 2002 13:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh man! Poor little Vegeta! He's sick and alone and almost drowned and aaagh! And Piccolo's figured out who he is! Well, sorta...Great chapter though, I can't wait for the rest, I'm totally captivated by this fic! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 26, 2001 14:04 CST
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Ohhh, poor Vegeta...he's so hungry and alone and sick...and that fishman...ewwww...Great description with him though, all his insane scratching and gross-ness...I can't wait till the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: December 23, 2001 19:05 CST
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Oooohhh...Poor little Vegeta! That's so awful!!! I feel so bad for the little guy...But I'm happy to see Dodoria beaten like the sack 'o crap he is...As usual, excellent chapter! I can't wait for more! |
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