| "Future Heart, Future Pain, Future Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Terra34 On: June 25, 2005 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO cool I love it I cant wait for more and Taro sounds rerally cool.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(me lazy:P) On: June 24, 2005 11:43 CDT
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O.O oh wow, how will kagome react cause ya just know she's gonna notice when her soul is complete. will she tell inuyasha or will she keep it a secret, maybe tell sango(the are the best of friends after all) and then ask her not to tell anyone.....i don't know, it's totally up to your fingers, and what fingers they are...update soon please, ja ne, Zirra
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Title: the wicked witch is dead
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH KIKYOU'S DEAD *ding dong the witch is dead, which old witch, the claypot bitch, ding dong the wicked witch is dead* i'm sorry to all u kikyou lovers but i HATE HER and i am glad she is gone great chapter cant wait til the next
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(not logged in...obviosly) On: June 22, 2005 12:19 CDT
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awsome chapter. hm what will happen, what will happen, update soon please, yeach, my review is short today..oh well, ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 23:53 CDT
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I like your story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how this story is playing out. You start with the permiss of a lustful mating scene, and downplay it with the addition of a cool plot. I really love being taken by surprise, the addition of the lost son was great. I'm really enjoying this so far. I hope you get a chance to update soon, because I am really looking forward to it. So don't disapoint me!!Ja
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Title: a small whimper
Reviewed By: Jezi futhark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 13:58 CDT
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ieeeeeeee. this is just mean i know everyone likes to keep everyone reading but this is getting so hard. i love your writting and it always leaves in a great spot... why do you like to do this to your readers. all i can do now is say thanks for the story and i would like more please....
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 18:57 CDT
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Ah, well now we now why. Just to make sure their there. But you know it's true. We all do something to our loved ones just to get a response that lets us know they are really, truly there. Oh, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 18:01 CDT
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yay another chapter. i love when authors update, *sigh* i swear like three of you updated today and i'm just in heavon. if you want a really good inuyasha fanfic with the canon pairings you shoud read sueric's work, she's one of the best there is, but aside from that, great chapter. i love how shippou(adult of course) silenlty withdrew from sight to give his friends and family some privacy along with his protection. Update asap please, till the Zirra
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Reviewed By: Jezi futhark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 18:58 CDT
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ieee i hate when i catch up and there is nothing left to read. i hope you up all your stories son and not just for me (even though i wouldn't mind) but for all who read your fic's your fan, jezi futhark
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Reviewed By: Jezi futhark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 14:35 CDT
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oh my gosh that is just so sad and harsh this is so mean... i love it though so umm what does that say about me...
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Reviewed By: k.t.w.h. (a.k.a. kyli the wolf hanyou) On: May 13, 2005 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update, update, update noooooooow
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 18:24 CDT
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Ooh, I liked that character. So she knows the truth, now if only he will welcome it. Please update soon. I would like to have a look at your site, just send it to me. Later.
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: em lazy today...didn't sign in On: May 12, 2005 17:31 CDT
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oo oo oo talking in riddles, i like when people talk in riddles, it confuses the main character so much, yet you(the reader)can usually tell what's being said ^^ she's talking about kags and inu being taro's mom and dad isn't she o0? hope i'm right :D great chapter, please update asap...*hands you a (insert fravite cyber plushie here)* there you go :D Zirra
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: May 10, 2005 21:07 CDT
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that's so tragic. :'(
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