| "Future Heart, Future Pain, Future Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 20:54 CDT
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I think is a good story I hope you keep writing it I hope you up date soon
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: May 09, 2005 01:30 CDT
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Wow! Very well written. I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 20:50 CDT
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Yet another good story from you. Hope to see more soon. And maybe some updates for your other ones. Hint, Hint. Later.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 16:07 CDT
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ooo intrigue, i can answer taro's question, i think. it's because he smells of the moon, and sesshy would be able to prove that he's inu's son and get him to give inua dn kags a chance or soomething along those lines, or even just kill him to keep him from chalenging(man i can't spell today) for leardership of the doggy demons. man i've confused myself, sorry, well great chapter, update asap please, i really want to know what happens next. Zirra
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Reviewed By: ioialoha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 19:48 CDT
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this is an amazingly original fic! I have yet to read another like it, very nice. do they manage to convice taro of who he really is? gotta know!! ^^
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Reviewed By: btrains126 On: May 05, 2005 01:50 CDT
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Found it on FFnet - which you apparently no longer exist on. What's up? I noticed the FFnet had more chapters than mmorg before it disappeared. Are the other chapters going to be posted on MMorg - are you going to continue writing? Hoping for another chapter soon...
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Reviewed By: Mr Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 10:46 CDT
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Re your suggestion, I read the story, and enjoyed it. Though there is the occasional weird comma, it flows perfectly and was very enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: illusion_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Just like the others I rated, this is an extreamly good fic! It was a bit confusing with the part that Taro came out though...Is he Inu and Kag's son? Anyway, I really like it! Your creativity is great! I can never even try to write something as good as this! Your lemons are great too! Please update, it's really good!
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Reviewed By: k.t.w.h ( kyli the wolf hanyou ) On: April 27, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon this was x-tremely good
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good then got a bit confuzing with the whole kid coming from the future couldn't you at least let them be happy for a little wile? before it happend? well it's your fanfic keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: A heart so pure [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 13:09 CDT
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This was a really good story, Sal. I enjoyed it almost as much as The Sweetest Sin..which I miss dearly. But this was good. Please continue.
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