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Title: Quite the arse whoopin ^-^
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 17, 2005 07:36 CST
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Dayum! Kouga whipped his ass...literally, lol. Hiten deserved that & more tho, that little shit. I just KNOW he's going to be the reason why InuYasha gets busted. Worse yet, I'm still mad at Kouga for not believing my Inu *pouts*. Nice lemon tho...I could almost *see* it! *waggles brows*
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Reviewed By: hanyou-elf (duh) On: December 09, 2005 09:51 CST
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hiten's going to get spanked... hiten's going to get spanked (singsong voice) *ahem* now that that's out of my system... i must say... that was so freaking hot! i can't wait to read what they have a... talk about... though i've no doubt it's going to be hot... x.x keep this up and i can't wait to see what naraku and inuyasha do next... poor inuyasha... all alone in his house...
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Title: Hell Yeah!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 07, 2005 21:49 CST
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I was ready for this update!! Poot InuYasha...no one believed him! Hiten that little skank-a-zoid! I can't believe Kouga stood there & let him get that hit off without letting Inu get his shit off. That was just wrong. Then there's Naraku...can we say obsessed already?! He's gonna be nothing but trouble! Wicked fic girl! I love it!
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Reviewed By: ifihadonewsh968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 20:10 CST
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U KNOW IM LOVING THIS STORY. HOT HOT HOOOT. lol update soon!!! ~Kim~
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 16:35 CST
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I love this line "third, you are a submissive little bitch. And if you want to be with me, you'll continue to be that. If not, there's the door" i thought that was so funny but I will have to say kouga needs to lean how to calm down alittle, but I really like that chapter its another good one from you but then again i like all of your stuff.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight (nsi) On: December 07, 2005 09:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew...another chapter wonderfully done!! Looks like Kouga and Yash are going through some dificulties....damn you Hiten...ahaha....well, it's official....you've got me hooked!! I sooo can't wait to read the next chapter!! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: James Lucient On: December 07, 2005 06:30 CST
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Man, these guys are FLAMING, lol. I wish Kagome would catch Inuyasha and just let him go. Maybe she's been seeing someone else too? When Inuyasha called Hiten a slut, I was rolling... and then he made Kouga submit, and who wouldn't? Kouga... rawr. :D I'm glad you UD'd. ;)
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! This fic is fucking great!! Naraku is ssooooo hott...and him fucking the hell out of InuYasha....whew... I'm anxious to see where this fic is heading! I must say it's different reading a fic written in the present tense...I guess I've just read more fics in past tense...o well..who cares...Great job and the citrus was great!! I only wish you would have put a little more detail...the lemons felt a bit rushed in some spots. Simply put, this fic is great and I eagerly await your next update! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: Bishieboylove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 14:40 CST
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OMG that fight between hiten and inuyasha,that was FREAKING AMAZING!(crys) you did evil cliffies again. UPDATE SOON.please!
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 05:23 CST
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ROFLMAO Man, they fight like bitches, although hot men rolling around on the floor is a nice image. Nice way for Kouga to show dominance, and it's such a damned turn on. I wish Inu would just tell Kagome how he feels. :( Forgive me for not reading sooner. I've been swamped. Kiss Kiss, Luc
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Reviewed By: Jerica On: November 04, 2005 20:40 CST
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Inu whooped up on Hiten good. Poor Kou, I feel bad for him. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 18:48 CST
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Wow i knew that hiten didn't like inuyasha but that is a bit much but im glad inuyasha got him good too. I also think kouga should open his eyes and see that hiten is the one doing all of this I guess he likes to create lots of drama. well I hope you up date this and all of your other stories soon
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Title: yay finally
Reviewed By: finally [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 18:47 CST
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yay u finally updatin. i've been wantin 4 this 4ever lmao. yay it was hottt update sooon
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou (who isn't signed in!) On: November 04, 2005 16:19 CST
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wows... (drool) i can't wait to see what happens next! you've got an amazingly interesting story and i can't wait for the next part! (drools) and you know how i love the fighting. ohhs... what's kouga's reaction going to be? what's he going to say? what's going to happen to them now? what's next? update! (pleading) (ahem) i love this story, you know that. and is hiten going to rat on him being married? i can't wait! and, my dear, great job and congratulations on being nominated!
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix(lazytosignin) On: November 04, 2005 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that i know you are tainted I finally saw that this story was also being posted here. LOVE IT like always...you mention seduction but what about Caught in a Spider Web...(foams at the mouth)...I'm really Looking forward to the next chapter...don't you dare go back and decide to make it a one shot :p. But anyway at least you updated this story, which is soooooo good.
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