| "What is Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2002 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where will the story go without Pan? She cannot die! Please. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Pannie!! You've got to save her! Pan CANNOT die!! By the way, good-lookin' out on Bulma kicking that bastard Yamcha to the curb!! Usually I just feel tepid towards Yammie, but when you start wishing children to die, well then, you deserve what you get.
*Hotohori4life mimics fan at a boxing match*
"Hit him with a left Veggie-Chan! Now a Right!!"
Gotta update!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 09, 2002 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad Yamcha is out the door. He's a low-life and a complete waste of oxygen. I loved it when Mrs. B clocked his "family jewels". Now all that's left is for Panny to get better, right? I really do hope she lives b/c if she doesn't everyone's gonna feel sad and lost without her. Write more soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: butterfly On: February 04, 2002 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u gotta write moooore plz, dives onto her knees and begs u giving u puppy eyes nearly in tears :S |
Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2002 16:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Well Veggie Trunks, This is the fifth story of yours that I've read & reviewed and I've got to say you rock ass!! All your stories contain 2 essential ingredients for me to stay hooked: Vegeta, irriatable as always, and my girl, Pannie!! Instead of just saying hurry up and update just this fan fic, I'll just say hurry up and udate them ALL!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vince On: January 31, 2002 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT FIC!!! Can't wait for more. Please update SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: SS3- Goku On: January 26, 2002 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really good story! I hope you add more soon |
Reviewed By: SS-Vegeta On: January 26, 2002 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOO! Don't stop it's so good. Please what's (Tear) gonna(tear) happen to (Tear) Pan. Hope you come up with more soon Peace. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! poor pan shes only 1 dont let her die. and if she does make it unnatural so she can be wished back. if any sayin is to die make it goku after he has goten. sry to all the lil goku fans but TRUNKS RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 07:03 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOO! I CAN'T DEAL! why did you ruin such a steamy sesh? hmmmm grrrrr.... you have to make it up to me later, okie? ohhh poor pan!!! i hope she's ok, that baby is too adorable to die! more please! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 23, 2002 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about a cliff hanger. I hope little Pan-chan survives. |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 23, 2002 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what's going to happen to Pan-chan not fair that she might die (Tear) Please put more up soon |
Reviewed By: pupb6 On: January 23, 2002 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story keep the chaps a comin |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, you updated! Can't wait to see what's next |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 22, 2002 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no please no, I already have tears in my eyes. Don't let Panny die, she's so young and Veggie has grown to love her and her death would kill him. Update soon |
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