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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 23:57 CDT
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Not bad. All the characters still seem to be playing similar roles. Despite the time difference. Not a lot of OOC, but there were a few noticable typos. A good beta reader would clear those up. Otherwise it looks like it can be made into a good story. Thanks for submitting to FFARG.
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Another great chapter. I really love it when Sesshomaru's Inu Youkai instincts kick in. It's hysterical when he gets jealous, especially when he's not supposed to be in love! And you're doing so well on not putting the two together so fast. It's appreciated. I also wanted to compliment you on InuYasha's character development. I really dislike it when, in a Sess/Kag fic, the author makes InuYasha the "bad guy", or at least an Inu of ill repute. So thanks! Please update soon; I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Toodles! Jin Ryu The Silver Dragon
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara On: July 03, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. This fic definitely comes with a surprise for myself. I really like that Kag and Sess paired up in this one. She seems to be breathtaking for Sess and I think it will do him good compared to his usual Stoic impression. I wonder what's going to happen next. I hope that Kag can get through all of this although it seems that Sess will only become alot more possessive of her. Please update as soon as you can. I really like this story and so far my imagination is going wild. Thanks alot.
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Reviewed By: Danell On: June 28, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutly fantastic. I love it I love it I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. The overall interaction between all of the characters is great. I love the way that you carried over their action and reactions into the present from the past. I do have one question for you though, will Sango be making an appearance in this story? I hope so. Please update!
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 02:50 CDT
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This is really great! I'm really starting to feel the suspence in this story and it's really great! Please update soon, I can't help but know what happens next! Bye for now!
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Reviewed By: clavira89 On: June 26, 2005 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yep, I definitely like your story ;) so what more can I say? Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 06:12 CDT
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I love this fic!One of the best one I ever read.Keep up the good work and update faster!Happy birthday by the way!
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not logged in...) On: June 23, 2005 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* More goodness. Plain and simple. Just Fluffy-sama goodness....
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Reviewed By: InuFan05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 15:27 CDT
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yeah, a nice long chapter! the longer the better. *grins* i like how you introduced kouga. hehee... he can be sooo possessive (sp?) at times it's annoying. but, still, he is a hotty. i love what you did to miroku. he totally deserved it. *starts to sniker* i always love it when he gets beat up for what he does. *grins and snikers* again, another great chapter. keep up the great work. oh, i got an idea while reading your responses to your reviews. you should have them go to a dance! *starts to giggle* kagome and sesshy dancing together... i can see it now... *breaks out into fits of laughter* .... sorry bout that. any way, keep up the excellent work! till next chapter, bye!
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Reviewed By: InuFan05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 17:51 CDT
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me likey! i like the fact that it takes place in an alternate universe. making them cops was original and unique. i truly love it. keep up the good work. i look foward to the next chappie. update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"For Richer or Poorer" has to be one of the best fanfics I've ever read! I mean it; it's that good. I really appreciate how you didn't throw Kagome and Sesshomaru together too quickly. It's kind of annoying when they fall madly in love at first sight, so I thank you for your tact.
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Reviewed By: moonwave (you know the deal) On: June 15, 2005 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY? Why do you leave me on such a cliffie? *fake sobs* Seriously, another fabulous chapter from the ever-fabulous you! I can't wait until the next one! *whispers* Happy birthday again.....
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 19:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
*rubs hands together* Oh, this is going to be good! I love emotional clashes!
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Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic is going pretty good so far there arent much errors maybe a few but thats common. The plot is good and you avoided the whole Inuyasha issue with Kikyo so thats good cause usually people make Inuyasha act like an asshole so that worked out nicely. One thing that i do reccomend is that you add more sparks in Kagomes and Sesshomarus relationship if you know what i mean ^.~ you could add a lemon and make the story more intresting further along. untill we meet again! bye and update soon.
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 10:48 CDT
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Yay! I'm the first MM.org reviewer! I took your advice to heart and came over here to read this one. I just have to say, you've got it, girl. I really enjoy reading what you write! Keep it up and I'll be here waiting for the next chapter!
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