| "For Richer or Poorer" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 11:31 CST
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BRAVO BRAVO Absolutely loved it...It just worked...hard to do with keeping everyone OOC and do a pairing like that well...so BRAVO...gonna go read another one of your stories now XD Cant wait But I will have to do that tomorrow as I stayed up till 3am trying to finish this one XP whoopsie but it was sooooooooooooo darn good
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. It kept me interested from start to finish. I loved the way you portrayed both Sesshomaru and Kagome. It's very hard to keep Sesshomaru in character but I think you did a great job. I enjoyed seeing Kagome being able to take care of herself and having a strong personality. You did a great job and I hope you continue writing.
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Reviewed By: Chibes whos not logged in On: August 08, 2006 18:37 CDT
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I noticed in your fight scene you had her fall backwards and it would have been better for her if in the chokehold to secure her base then bend at her hips holding onto the arm the crosses in front of her and throwing him foward by bending forward and rotating to the sameside the arm crossing in front of her originates from...this is very painful for the attacker and keeps the victim on her feet... i took self defense after i read it and caught the thing now, i still love this story anyways and this is probably the 5th time i read it...
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Title: For Richer or Fro Poorer
Reviewed By: kagfan121 On: July 06, 2006 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story sooooooo much and I thought it was the perfect length, very creative, and had a very good style. It is an asome story and I think u should keep writing even if that means start another fic *hint* *hint*. Anayways I loved it and i know that many other people did 2 so keep writing and tell me when u put another one out patcheslover2001@yahoo.com 'k good luck and goodbye
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Reviewed By: sheiba90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was sooo good. I think putting Sesshomaru and Kagome together is a really great idea, they'd make the perfect couple! Seriously, please tell me what other stories you've righten.
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Title: For Richer Or Poorer
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: sheiba90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
his story is way excellent!! I love it! Do you have any other storys out? Pleaz let me know!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sweetkijo On: March 04, 2006 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, sat down this morning and started to read this story. I thouroughly enjoyed it. Very romantic. Thank you!! I will check out your other stories now. Take care!
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not signed in) On: March 03, 2006 06:21 CST
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Ah! *glomps* This was quite possibly the best thing I've ever gotten in an email! What a great way to start my morning! You rock! *bows*
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Reviewed By: MistressMaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sorry that It has taken so long to reply to this story...... but it totally kicks ass. I really really really love the way that you ended it. But then you are an aweasome writer. Tootles.
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Reviewed By: Missy x33 On: January 10, 2006 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic!!
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not signed in) On: January 09, 2006 08:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW! *cries* That was so good! That was probably one of the best endings to a story I've read in a long time! And I especially like the story of the engagement ring....
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Title: Wee.
Reviewed By: T3h Rachael and Ray On: December 29, 2005 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ray: We're back. =D Rachael: Mhm. Though only read the prologue! Have that changed quickly enough though. This story is t3h shiz. Fvorite Moment/part: "Everything was perfect. And Sesshoumaru hated it." That gave this Rachael a laugh or two! Ray: Laugh? You fell out of your chair. >_> Rachael: Shutup. >< Anyway, awesome story so far!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14(not loged in) On: December 26, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! it's great, and suspenceful, and you have to add another chappy, please! i'll die if you don't, ok so i wont die on the outside, but a little piece of me will on the inside! XD
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Title: You rock
Reviewed By: Niamha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your writing. I know i have reviewed Speechless as well as your new story and i am probably totally repeating myself but o well. you are awesome! This story is so interesting and flows beautifully. I cannot wait for your next chapter!
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