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Reviewed By: MistressMaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it. I am finally getting to post this reply after many complications with logging in. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I like the personal conflict that seems to be going on inside Sesshomaru. Also that you get the background on all the characters is totally plausible way. Also the play between Inuyasha and Kagome's family along with the "Jealousy" of Sesshomaru. I really am looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us next. Keep the good stuff coming.
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 01:01 CDT
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Hi again! I really have to say, you really are good at suspence. I'm enjoying it very much.:D Anyway, I like how your setting up the stage of your plot. It's getting intense and I believe some jealousy is loose here and there. I like how you did Rin's story, about her family being killed and Sesshomaru was there for her, that's so sweet of him!X3 Poor Kagome... she's going to have a jealous Sesshomaru on her hands and an Inu-Yasha matchmaker on her back, inlcuding money and the case problems on her back isn't enough!@_x Makes you want more of your story! It's sooooo yummy!Please update soon! Bye for now my friend!!!XD
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*picks herself up off the ground* Sorry, the sheer greatness of this chapter floored me. You know what I think of this story. I especially liked InuYasha and his plotting. Yay for stirring up trouble!
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there!- Aw, you're so sweet. And of course you'd have to put in fluff! What's a fanfic without it? So, once again, great chapter. And thanks for updating so soon! You're chapters are always really long, updated quickly, and well done. I don't know how you find the time! Wow! I'm also really glad Sesshomaru and Kagome are progressing in their relationship. You're doing it perfectly; not too fast, not too slow. And I love the Fluffy parts! (Get it? Fluffy, Sesshomaru, fluff? He he he, um....) Yeah, so great job! I can't wait until the next chapter's fluff; I LOVE FLUFF! And I'm really enjoying Sesshomaru's demon side. Most authors will either emphisize it too much or will just ignore the issue, but you're doing absolutely lovely! I'm sure I've told you this before, but I really do love it when Sess gets possesive and his youkai instincts kick in! I've got a question: InuYasha and Sesshomarus' past is the same as anime, right? So was Kagome there and she's a reincarnation, or was it the fight over Tetsuiga and nothing with the group or jewel? Anyway, it's pretty cool! Please update as soon as possible, which I know is rather difficult. Don't totally lose your social life trying to update, but do do it soon! Thanks again for your wonderful fic! Jin Ryu
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara On: July 10, 2005 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter alot. It definitely gives you an idea about Kagomes home life and Inuyasha and Sesshomarus brotherly love. I'm glad that Sess finally met her family because they seem to have accepted him as part of that. Although it really saddens me that the Higurashi shrine is in such need of care and repairs. I hope that Sess in his own way will help without anyone really knowing that it is him. I think that Kagome is starting to fall for Sess. That's a good thing though she has a fiery spirit and he's usually so cold and stoic. Their life together I think will be an interesting one. He will probably definitely fall for her and she will him given time. They would make a great couple and I am sure that Rin wouldn't mind having a mother around. Please update soon. You have left me wanting for more. My imagination grows curious about this story and with as how far that can run it seems almost endless. THANKS ALOT.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 23:57 CDT
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Not bad. All the characters still seem to be playing similar roles. Despite the time difference. Not a lot of OOC, but there were a few noticable typos. A good beta reader would clear those up. Otherwise it looks like it can be made into a good story. Thanks for submitting to FFARG.
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Another great chapter. I really love it when Sesshomaru's Inu Youkai instincts kick in. It's hysterical when he gets jealous, especially when he's not supposed to be in love! And you're doing so well on not putting the two together so fast. It's appreciated. I also wanted to compliment you on InuYasha's character development. I really dislike it when, in a Sess/Kag fic, the author makes InuYasha the "bad guy", or at least an Inu of ill repute. So thanks! Please update soon; I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Toodles! Jin Ryu The Silver Dragon
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara On: July 03, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. This fic definitely comes with a surprise for myself. I really like that Kag and Sess paired up in this one. She seems to be breathtaking for Sess and I think it will do him good compared to his usual Stoic impression. I wonder what's going to happen next. I hope that Kag can get through all of this although it seems that Sess will only become alot more possessive of her. Please update as soon as you can. I really like this story and so far my imagination is going wild. Thanks alot.
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Reviewed By: Danell On: June 28, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutly fantastic. I love it I love it I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. The overall interaction between all of the characters is great. I love the way that you carried over their action and reactions into the present from the past. I do have one question for you though, will Sango be making an appearance in this story? I hope so. Please update!
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 02:50 CDT
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This is really great! I'm really starting to feel the suspence in this story and it's really great! Please update soon, I can't help but know what happens next! Bye for now!
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Reviewed By: clavira89 On: June 26, 2005 13:10 CDT
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Yep, I definitely like your story ;) so what more can I say? Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 06:12 CDT
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I love this fic!One of the best one I ever read.Keep up the good work and update faster!Happy birthday by the way!
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not logged in...) On: June 23, 2005 16:25 CDT
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*sigh* More goodness. Plain and simple. Just Fluffy-sama goodness....
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Reviewed By: InuFan05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 15:27 CDT
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yeah, a nice long chapter! the longer the better. *grins* i like how you introduced kouga. hehee... he can be sooo possessive (sp?) at times it's annoying. but, still, he is a hotty. i love what you did to miroku. he totally deserved it. *starts to sniker* i always love it when he gets beat up for what he does. *grins and snikers* again, another great chapter. keep up the great work. oh, i got an idea while reading your responses to your reviews. you should have them go to a dance! *starts to giggle* kagome and sesshy dancing together... i can see it now... *breaks out into fits of laughter* .... sorry bout that. any way, keep up the excellent work! till next chapter, bye!
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Reviewed By: InuFan05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 17:51 CDT
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me likey! i like the fact that it takes place in an alternate universe. making them cops was original and unique. i truly love it. keep up the good work. i look foward to the next chappie. update soon please!
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