| "For Richer or Poorer" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"For Richer or Poorer" has to be one of the best fanfics I've ever read! I mean it; it's that good. I really appreciate how you didn't throw Kagome and Sesshomaru together too quickly. It's kind of annoying when they fall madly in love at first sight, so I thank you for your tact.
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Reviewed By: moonwave (you know the deal) On: June 15, 2005 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY? Why do you leave me on such a cliffie? *fake sobs* Seriously, another fabulous chapter from the ever-fabulous you! I can't wait until the next one! *whispers* Happy birthday again.....
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 19:18 CDT
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*rubs hands together* Oh, this is going to be good! I love emotional clashes!
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Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic is going pretty good so far there arent much errors maybe a few but thats common. The plot is good and you avoided the whole Inuyasha issue with Kikyo so thats good cause usually people make Inuyasha act like an asshole so that worked out nicely. One thing that i do reccomend is that you add more sparks in Kagomes and Sesshomarus relationship if you know what i mean ^.~ you could add a lemon and make the story more intresting further along. untill we meet again! bye and update soon.
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 10:48 CDT
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Yay! I'm the first MM.org reviewer! I took your advice to heart and came over here to read this one. I just have to say, you've got it, girl. I really enjoy reading what you write! Keep it up and I'll be here waiting for the next chapter!
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