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Title: You have been nominated!
Reviewed By: Auraki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 13:40 CST
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You have been nominated at The Readers Have Chosen! Each week readers and authors alike select their favorite fanfiction to recommend for the Weekly Recommendation Poll, and your story has been added to our Poll! The voting will end on Saturday at midnight (PST), and the results will be published on the main website on Sunday. Thank you for sharing with us and good luck! Visit our forum to make your own recommendations or to just to read good fiction. Site (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / index . html Poll (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index . php ? board = 6.0
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 00:33 CST
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Muy bien! Fantasico! Loved it. What a sweet little love story. Thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 00:57 CST
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Wow. I'm in a state of shock. This is *everyone in the room covers their ears* so freaking GGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! IT WAS SO AMAZING AND THE CULTURE WAS SO FACINATING AND THE DIALOGUE THE PASSION AND DON'T FORGET THE EMOTION WAS SO KAWAIIII!!! ~_~ (UMM...sorry about that...I'm hyper again) But seriously that was so awesome! The diagolue and the passion and emotion inserted was very MAGNIFICENT!!!! That was so intense and when Inuyasha suddenly said that no one could love her as much as he was so passionate I felt I could faint! Thanks for posting this one-shot because it is truely a work of an artist! *hands a bouquet of roses to the author*
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Reviewed By: sleepercat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORIE. I espesially loved how you enfused culture. Would you write another one like this please!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 13:34 CST
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Wow, I have never been able to put in the upside down question mark or exclamation point. I can't do the n in Espana properly either, only accents. You probably have a Spanish keyboard, no? Creo que usted habla espanol, entonces yo puedo. Me gustaba el cuento muchisimo. Vivía en Espana para dos anos, en mi ninez, en el pueblo Sant Cugat, cerca a Barcelona. Era muy joven, por eso no sé nada de gitanos o algo. Pero me gustaba mucho leer un cuento de Espana. Lo echo mucho. Continuaba escribiendo y buen viaje a Espana.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty Awesome job you have done here. I didn't see how you were ever going to combine Medieval Japan and Modern Spain, but you did. Bravo! Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Priestess Skye *nsi* On: July 12, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was such a beautiful piece. I was completely entranced right from the beginning to the end. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
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Reviewed By: Cattykit (nsi) On: July 11, 2005 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so lovely. Complete romance and nothing else. And a one-shot to boot! There should be more of these out there... but unfortunately, not everyone has your talent and creativity. I really like the setting and the whole background of this story. The infiltration of the Spanish language into some of the dialogue is refreshing and makes the whole scene more convincing. I'm really glad I take Spanish class now ^_^ It helped me understand some of the words. I'm also really grateful for the short vocabulary list at the end for the more coloquial language you used because I realized that most of the words you put at the bottom were the ones that I didn't know (they don't exactly tell you how to swear in Spanish at school =P). But anyway, this whole story was so incredibly cute. I absolutely loved the swimming scene and that last scene at night was to die for. This was very nearly the perfect story (the grammar was a tad off, but nothing really to complain about) and has to be one of my favorite one-shots! It'd be so awesome to see this one-shot continued with more romancy goodness, but I know, deep down, that it would only ruin what you've got so far. Somethings are better left open-ended. I could probably continue praising this fic for hours, but I've rambled enough. Needless to say, I really enjoyed reading it as I have enjoyed many of your other works. I hope you'll get out more fics in the near future and I look forward to seeing more from you! ~cattykit~
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Reviewed By: tulip On: July 01, 2005 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're amazing
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 19:25 CDT
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beautiful story. I've been to spain. i went to madrid and toledo. I've also taken 4 years of spanish. spain is truely gorgeous. And the people are all so nice. I did see a lot of gypsies. That was really interesting. I one day hope to return to spain to stay for a few months. I was there during holy week. right before easter. i saw the parade on saturday. when the virgin mary is mourning the death of jesus christo. i learned a lot from your story. it was very good. i hope you write more like this.
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Reviewed By: Stranger101 On: June 01, 2005 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a completely random thing. How can Kagome have a grandfather who's a priest? I'm assuming that since this story is set is Spain and that Kagome talks of confession that she and her family are Catholic. Did he become a priest after his wife died and whatever child he had was old enough to take care of itself? Anyway, I liked this fic and think you should continue writing AU one-shots. You're a good writer.
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Reviewed By: Stranger101 On: June 01, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a completely random thing. How can Kagome have a grandfather who's a priest? I'm assuming that since this story is set is Spain and that Kagome talks of confession that she and her family are Catholic. Did he become a priest after his wife died and whatever child he had was old enough to take care of itself? Anyway, I liked this fic and think you should continue writing AU one-shots. You're a good writer.
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Title: ffrg review
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 11:50 CDT
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Thanks for submitting your story to ffrg, it was a pleasure to read. You did a lovely job translating the characters from Japan to Spain and did especially well maintaining the class conflicts if you will. This is one of the rare cases where I will simply leave it at "this is a good AU fic" rather than say "why not try making them your own characters." For some things to watch for--check over your spelling. I know that you threw in a couple Spanish words and that worked well since even without previous knowledge I would have been able to understand them in context, but you did misspell a few words (violate=violet and, I think you misspelled secret as well). Also, watch the number of adjectives you string before a feature (ex. 'dark long black hair' is a bit much and a bit awkward). I'd say you have a beautifully crafted piece here and you write in a voice that is very pleasant to read. My Spanish is quite rusty, so forgive me if this is wrong, lol, but ¡me encanta!
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Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: Kellen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:50 CDT
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Thank you for submitting to FFRG. This was a wonderful read. There isn't much I can say about the story. Although the setting was very different, you managed to keep the characters mostly in character. (I had a few problems with Kagome once in awhile, but I don't think I can put my finger on it. Perhaps it's because Kagome can be stubborn and argumentative at times and I didn't see that in this fic.) The description I though was beautiful. Simplistic enough not to be overwhelming, but beautifully and eloquently done. There were a few words in the story that threw me off, and it's a recurring problem through the story. There are words that are spelled right but are the wrong word, ie, you have "holly" instead of "holy", "composer" instead of "composure" and a few others sprinkled throughout the story. Great story, and I was glad I had the opportunity to read it. Cheers!
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: May 22, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this was absolutely wonderful! I mean, really, WOW!! I have never read anything like this at all, and I love the fact that you intermixed the different cultures! :) I really love how everything is progressing and I must say that I'm estatic that you decided to write this and will be patiently waiting until you update it again! I swear I'm addicted to this one...I was at the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading it! :) Anyway, I was wondering if you knew about the site, www.notifylist.com? If not, its a site that allows you to sign up for a mailing list. I know a lot of fanfic authors who use it to notify their readers of when they update their stories. Basically you just sign up for an account and have the readers subscribe to your notifylist. Then you go in and write a note or something like that and it sends a message to everyone subscribed that you have updated. Anyway, I hope this solves your problem! I just thought it might be easier than, say, using an yahoo! group or something like that. Anyway, like I said, great chapter! Great story! I was really blown away with it and can't wait to read more! :)
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