| "Time Traveling Screws Everything Up" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you story is pretty good, but some of your facts are wrong (e.g. the shikon no tama was in Kagome's side not her chest; Demeter is a she not a he) and you need to check your spelling and grammar. Some suggestions that could make your story better are you could reread and/or have somebody read to you what you wrote after you write it to make sure everything makes since, dubble check your facts, and/or get a beta reader.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:32 CDT
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I annoy everybody with that tiki tiki tembo crap. Somehow I remember the whole thing and it gets onpeoples nerves...I havent read that book in years though
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 22:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool! It's been a few months since you've updated this -- hope you get a chance to continue it soon! Nice job! (I'm still laughing ove Hiei's list!)
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this story is great.Please update soon.I want to know how Kag's distroys the hydra,and I want to know the reaction of Katen,and Sein when they meet Hiei. So UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
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Title: kagome
Reviewed By: kagomay123@yahoo.com On: July 11, 2006 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur doing a great job with the story that kagome becomes a goddess i was hooked from chapter 1 plz update as soon as u can i cant wait for the next chapter *looks at writer with sad kitty eyes* "meow?"(please?) and no ur not crazy ur cool... uno im the only one in my school that will take crazy, freaky, weird as compliments.(COOL! I spelt it right!! im not good with grammer)
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 08:21 CDT
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Good Story, I'm really enjoying it. I can only hope that Hiei and Kagome do finally get to be together. It just seems so unfair that they have both struggled their whole lives to be together to only get pulled apart constantly. And I know what you mean about feeling appreciated, the kids, and dinner. I seem to have the same problem with reviews. I have almost 2000 visits and like 29 reviews, major difference. Much thanks on the review you left me, I could feel the appreciation. Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_soulmateis_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Nice semi-cliffhanger at the end. And will Kagome and Hiei ever get to be together? Oh well, I hope that you update soon. Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Twiny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 15:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Job! Keep it up u lil monter..!
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Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thatwas awsome plaes update soon I can't wait.
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Reviewed By: Irish Bucco [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great please update soon.
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Reviewed By: silver1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. please update as soon as you can.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner Not Logged on ... On: November 23, 2005 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, u like to write don't you? But why do you take so long to do so? can you write longer chappies? I luv Hiei/Kagome pairing!
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Title: ugh!
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write longer chapters plz! i'm glad dat dis is a hiei/kagome pairrring
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Camille On: November 06, 2005 18:44 CST
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hahaha this is one of the funnest fics i've ever read. keep up the good work and please update! *continues to laugh ass off*
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea (nsi) On: November 01, 2005 14:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah, it was short. But I still liked it ^^
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