| "Time Traveling Screws Everything Up" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: sugar high water uma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 17:47 CDT
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you must write more, i am on a 1-6 schuleud, and i still find time to update my stories. It's a simple solution, write short chappies that get updated sooner, simple.
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Reviewed By: sugar high water uma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write a squel, squels are cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: x SiLv3r Ra1n x [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 19:57 CDT
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u spelled hiei wrong.. just wanted to point that out. and great fic.
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Reviewed By: yuni On: August 19, 2005 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww why did you have to do that it was getting really good. Please hurry up and update.
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Reviewed By: DarkenedSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 16:41 CDT
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Love the story! LMAO, what Kags did to the guys was so friggen hilarious!
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Title: I can't wait! *^_^*
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till you update again! *^_^* I love the story by the way! *^_~* Keep up the good work! *^_^* Your doing great so far! YAY!!!!!!!! JA-NE!!!!!*^_~*
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Title: Time Traveling Screws Everything Up !!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 18:30 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Uker On: July 26, 2005 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last chapter was the funniest thing I have ever read in 4ever! You have really great ideas that I haven't seen used. Though Im beginning to feel really bad for the guys, since their recieving the end of Kagome's pranks. Please keep on writing! I've really enjoyed what you've written on this fic so far.
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Title: *^_^* GOOD JOB!*^_^*
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the colors make it easer to know whos talking. *^_^* plus, the story is so FUNNY! *^o^* your doing a great job! *^_^* I'm dieing to know what happens next. *^.^* I'm just sitting on the edge of my seat. Like This: *O_o* I can't wait for the next chapie!!!! *^_^* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!*^o^* JA-NE!!!!!!!!*^_~*
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Title: Leafe Knight of darkness
Reviewed By: Celestaion On: July 23, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really a good fic. but i want more K/H action!! i love it.
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Title: Time Traveling Screws Everything Up !!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 21:42 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please?
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Title: LOVELOVELOVE
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD JOB!!!!! *^_^* Please update soon!!! I'm inlove with your story! It has so much live to it! ya know? KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!! JA-NE!!!!!*^_~*
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 21:50 CDT
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Yukina's face hides lots of pain....she can have her own secrets (I have her with a mate in mine...) update again soon please.
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: moonscout11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsum! it's really good! please update soon! oh! and thank you for reviewing my story! ^_^ it's called 'Confused Troubles' it may have not been good, but thank you for reviewing it anyway! please update soon! bye bye! ^_^
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678(not logged in) On: July 15, 2005 16:07 CDT
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Great story so far!Oh, and here's some more info about Hina and Ruri. Hiei doesn't want revenge on Hina, his mother. If you watch episodes 99-100 of Yu Yu Hakusho you'll see that Hiei has already gone off to the Island and decieded that the ice maidens were already dead to him because they forced them selves from love and the outside world. He met Ruri and she took him to a grave. Hinas grave. She hadn't wanted Hiei to be banished and had tried to stop Ruri, but Ruri was positive he would survive and come kill them all. Hina killed herself. When Hiei came back like Ruri had told him to, she told him of Yukina, his twin. Then as he walked away, Ruri became aware that Hiei was Yukina's brother and Hina's son that was banished for being a boy and for being a fire demon and sobbed out apology after apology and he agreed not to hurt her.Hiei the emigo was what they called him. Cursed child of the ice village. Then he set of to find Yukina and his tear drop that he got back from Mukura at the end of the episode after he fought the man who gave him the Jagan implant.
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