| "Time Traveling Screws Everything Up" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 11:50 CDT
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Don't lisen to blackshadowz243.It's your story. It can go the way you want it to go! It wouldn't mater if you said the earth was white and the sky was falling, it's your story and it dosen't have to fit it the real live. I mean, demons arn't real and we write about them. so you can say that one of the gods are both sexs, it's your story. *^_~*
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR DOING GREAT!!!*^o^* wow you got so many chapters up already? O_o That's so cool!!!!!!!!! *^_^* keep up the GREAT work your doing! ok? Love your story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!*^_^* JA-NE!!*^_~*
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Reviewed By: Lava On: July 14, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to fix Hiei's name it not spelled Heie but Hiei thanks by
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz243 On: July 09, 2005 16:54 CDT
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Hi, I really like how this story is turning out but i have a bone to pick with you. It concerns the chapter with the Gods. And it kind of set me off a bit. I've studied Greek Gods and Goddesses in the third grade and would like to say this... Demeter is the Goddess of Harvest and whatnot..not a he as you refer her as. It bothers me but aside from that and some spelling its great..
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli) On: July 09, 2005 16:00 CDT
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good chappie, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 23:23 CDT
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update soon please. Really good and interesting chappies
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 18:56 CDT
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confusing riddles, no guesses for this one....update soon please.
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 14:20 CDT
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Your story's really good so far! One of the riddles is a map! That's the only one my brain can contiplate at the moment.Please update soon!
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Title: You go girl!!!! *^_^*
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how your fanfic is turnning out!!! *^_^* it's great, keep up the good work and please update soon ok? *^_^* JA-NE!!!*^_~*
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Reviewed By: XHiei LoverX On: July 03, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur choice of pairing the plot is fantastic^-^ PLZ update soon
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Reviewed By: xFluffiesGirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 23:06 CDT
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Your story is awesome i really enjoying it so far^-^ just to let u know u spelled Hiei wrong its actually spelled Hiei not Heie
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Reviewed By: ookami san the anime lover (not logged) On: June 30, 2005 11:59 CDT
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me, myself,i, and of course you!!! caught up!!!!!!!!! my long lost friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i vot for those!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:00 CDT
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the riddles make my brain hurt. @.@ I have a guess: 1)bee, or butterfly, 2)he tried to eat the fish and choked on it 3) he was burried alive, and died. The new format's pretty good. But it's hard to read, and the color for Yukina is too light, but it's a good chappie, update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 17:38 CDT
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just another cliffie, at least you're updateing fast. k, update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 21:11 CDT
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from one cliffie to another, geeze. Update soon please.
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