| "Back Again" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kisa>. On: May 12, 2006 18:27 CDT
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u need to revise the first few chaps. because u spelled Kagome wrong k.well keep up the great work...and as u no dont mind the spellin' its horable like useable. your bff Kisa>.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomarus_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok not that impressed by this chap but over all I give you a 7 sorry but this chapter waz kinda boring but update soon ok plz.
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Reviewed By: dark miko On: June 23, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason i gave it a 9 was cuz the grammer was'ent to good the story was connfusing but after all its stillgood
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Reviewed By: Sesshomarus_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok you gotta continue the stoy is good so far so keep writing I want to know if Inuyasha finally gets over Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Purple_Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 17:49 CDT
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*laughs* Violent, you think that is violent, if you think that is violent then where have you been. I've read people having their heads chopped off and their brains oozing from their skull. She can do as she pleases and if killing bugs with a gaint gun is what she wants to do then let her do it. You don't have to read that part of the story anyways, its just her comments, get use to it. Now that my little rant is over I would just like to say, I love this story! Update as soon as you can darling!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomarus_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 16:12 CDT
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update plz this story rox it aint to bad but that bug issue was a little to violent so seriously knock it off cause you're a little to crazy not that I'm trying to be mean you're the one who said no falmes be honest well I am. anyway this story is the best I've ever read, keep going. HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Purple_Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like it so far! Keep up the good work! You spelt some of the names wrong but besides that...it rocked! Good Job!
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Reviewed By: miko_onna209 On: May 14, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing please oh and its Sango like it lot ~snuggles to all!
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Reviewed By: miko_onna209 On: May 14, 2005 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey good start but its Kagome and Inuyasha and Kirara and Kikyo good job tho
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Title: Back Again (it is very good)
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very good beggining. Please continue writing! So,... yes you SHOULD keep writing PLEASE *large puppy eyes and a pitiful whine*
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