| "The Mind's Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: Pawz On: July 19, 2005 21:04 CDT
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First and foremost: I love your little bunnies and snowman! Cutest way I've ever seen anyone do a scene break. As for the rest...Wow. Very dramatic and now I feel very saddend for both Kagome and InuYasha and the rest of the gang. But there is a remote hope somewhere isn't there? Thanks for the warning of possible lateness of updates.
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Reviewed By: Summer Whispers On: July 19, 2005 15:22 CDT
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Alot of questions answered, but even more left unanswered. Great! Good luck with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ardent-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 12:21 CDT
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WOOTWOOT! Amazing, I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: the color blue On: July 14, 2005 23:39 CDT
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your slipping its been 3 weeks I know you've got other stories but this is a little much if something came up you should leave an authors note Please continue as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Ardent-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 11:17 CDT
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OMG, this is just amazing. Plez right more.
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Reviewed By: Ardent-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 11:24 CDT
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OMG, very cool and interesting. Kinda on the long side...yeah only kinda.
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Reviewed By: Summer Whispers On: July 04, 2005 13:59 CDT
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Great phrase you had Inu Yahsa say, it gives the chapter a great closing. Can't wait for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Summer Whispers On: June 27, 2005 22:26 CDT
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I can really see the images in this chapter, it seems as if your writing was brought one step furthur. So, in other words, excellent job, and keep on with the great writing skills!
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Reviewed By: Summer Whispers On: June 27, 2005 22:25 CDT
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I can really see the images in this chapter, it seems as if your writing was brought one step furthur. So, in other words, excellent job, and keep on with the great writing skills!
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Reviewed By: Summer Whispers On: June 25, 2005 22:14 CDT
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Yeah! It's leading up to something good,I can tell.
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Reviewed By: Summer Whisper On: June 25, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was fabulous. As soon as I read the summary, I was sure that the story would be good, and I've only read the first chapter and I can tell the rest is going to be great. Don't worry I'll review for every chapter, as a fellow writer, I know how great it feels to get comments from your readers. Can't wait for chapter two, I'll just have to find time to read it. Life can get so busy!
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Title: typo
Reviewed By: The color blue On: June 24, 2005 18:28 CDT
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on that last review i ment to put a 9 not an 8
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Title: *contented sigh*
Reviewed By: The color blue On: June 24, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always. I appologize if I was a litle overbearing I was unaware of your other ongoing works. I may read them if I have the time. You made just a few grammar errors. During the end of the fight for one. It says something along the lines of a force Kagome from Kagome. I think you ment "came from Kagome". Other than that it was pure genius. I gladly await chapter next. Signed, An old heart that beats only for love.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 23:33 CDT
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That's better...well it's better for me but not for poor Miroku. Please update again soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 22, 2005 22:36 CDT
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["I was just curious." The monk shrugged and sought refuge underneath another tree. Grimly he ] ??? "Grimly he," what? ARRGH! Fix it! Fix it! Please!
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