| "The Mind's Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Summer Whispers On: June 25, 2005 22:14 CDT
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Yeah! It's leading up to something good,I can tell.
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Reviewed By: Summer Whisper On: June 25, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was fabulous. As soon as I read the summary, I was sure that the story would be good, and I've only read the first chapter and I can tell the rest is going to be great. Don't worry I'll review for every chapter, as a fellow writer, I know how great it feels to get comments from your readers. Can't wait for chapter two, I'll just have to find time to read it. Life can get so busy!
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Title: typo
Reviewed By: The color blue On: June 24, 2005 18:28 CDT
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on that last review i ment to put a 9 not an 8
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Title: *contented sigh*
Reviewed By: The color blue On: June 24, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always. I appologize if I was a litle overbearing I was unaware of your other ongoing works. I may read them if I have the time. You made just a few grammar errors. During the end of the fight for one. It says something along the lines of a force Kagome from Kagome. I think you ment "came from Kagome". Other than that it was pure genius. I gladly await chapter next. Signed, An old heart that beats only for love.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 23:33 CDT
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That's better...well it's better for me but not for poor Miroku. Please update again soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 22, 2005 22:36 CDT
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["I was just curious." The monk shrugged and sought refuge underneath another tree. Grimly he ] ??? "Grimly he," what? ARRGH! Fix it! Fix it! Please!
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Title: Where are you?
Reviewed By: The color blue On: June 20, 2005 19:20 CDT
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We're waiting. I understand that things may be hectic but if you think that things like this may happen what you can do is leave an authors note. I'm still waiting patiently. Please don't stop.
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Title: Oooh, how gross
Reviewed By: rin(NLI) On: June 11, 2005 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the battle scenes, I just love the gorry grossness of it all.
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Title: uhhhh
Reviewed By: the color blue On: June 08, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... you've kinda stumped me. I'll say this. You're doing a great job with the battle scene, just be sure not to make it last too long. One question. Why do they always end up in the headman's house? You'd think at least one would see through the act. Also, a small hint. Somewhere in the story there should be a kind of quiet chapter actionwise. It just kinda goes with the character, dramatic, and any romantic setups. Great job and I've still got my bazooka at the ready.Signed an old heart that beats only for love.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 03, 2005 21:21 CDT
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Another great chapter! Thanks for the update and I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 18:19 CDT
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sorry I havent reviewed yet, I've been moving...and my computors packed. I have to use the one down here in the lab. Awsome update^^ Who is calling to kagome? OOooooo I want wait to read the next!
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Reviewed By: The color blue On: May 26, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm watching you. If you don't finish the beautiful peace I'll find you. But seriously, please continue this story. You've captured me with and that is no small task. Signed, An old heart that beats only for love
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Reviewed By: Shadow15 (not logged on sry) On: May 25, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got me hooked on your story..Please update soon, I want to know what will happen!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 11:25 CDT
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I like it. Please continue and update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: rin^^(NLI) On: May 17, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL! I love to read storries where the characters get problems like this. Its just so neat how they overcome them. Totaly awsome. I'm going to be waiting for the next update, whether its a week, a month, or a year, I'll be waiting. Like I wait for everything else......I truly do have no social life T_T......
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