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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2010 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gojyo sort of reminds me of a male Chii more than this Saber Marionette J person. Then again I still haven't seen the anime so maybe he does resemble that character. I just think it's cute and refreshing that as OOC as he is he's endearing to me. I'm also glad that the dog, cat and monkey can teach him things that it would take the good doctor a while to teach. And it was so touching when Gojyo came running for Hakkai, not wanting to be left behind... looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2010 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really thought that the first chapter was very interesting… I'm sorry I don't think I ever have seen the anime Saber Marionette J. but it sounds familiar I guess. I don't think I've ever seen Gojyo look so innocent and totally confused as I have in this first chapter. This is why I spent nearly an hour and a half searching for this story. I was so upset because I remember reading a story a long time ago that blew my mind and I wanted to suddenly read it but I couldn't remember the name of it. I just knew it had a scientist that I could swear was Hakkai and a clone or doll or something of the sort that was Gojyo. I even had my friend looking for me and I found it in the last place I searched which was under my favorites in mediamorph… so glad I put it there because I'd be heartbroken if I missed reading such a creative story. Thank you so much for sharing this to the world.
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Reviewed By: Christal On: July 20, 2005 19:33 CDT
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As usual, FANTASTIC!!! However, when Gojyo pressed the enter key after seeing Jiroushin's and Kwannon's faces angain, I didn't think I'd be able to stop crying... The part where Koumyo leaves Sanzo to get all of the equipment was quite funny!! Keep up the great work, and I am definitly praying for ya'!!!
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 19:20 CDT
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The interaction between Gojyo, Sanzo, and Koumyo felt like a quick trip back to earlier chapters, where Gojyo was still living with Hakkai. A nice, nostalgic romp to break from the heavy drama for a few. It was sad to see Jiroushin and Kwannon give their goodbyes, but I liked they 'live' on in Hakuryuu. And Sanzo's reaction to the jeep, so typically and wonderfully Sanzo. Now, I'm going to go crash at your LJ, while sending virtual curses at that magazine for giving you so much grief.
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Reviewed By: Christal On: July 10, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That 1 below, don't pay no attention to it, I didn't mean to hit the button!! I wasn't even done typing!!! It's not supposed to be a 1, it's supposed to be 10!!
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Reviewed By: Christal On: July 10, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
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Rory, I still love it. Waiting makes things sweeter when it comes!! Until next time!
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Reviewed By: Arileo On: July 10, 2005 18:35 CDT
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Yay! Koumyo! Its so incrediby rare for him to be in even AU fics.And... isn't 'Xyberdyne' the name of the corporation in T-2 or something like that?
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 19:16 CDT
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After all this they still want to screw around with your money? If the job market weren't so hellish, I'd say walk. Gah. I'll just keep my fingers crossed on this end. I was quite surprised with how you introduced Koumyo into this. Though strange to think of him in a scientific role, it fits with the web of relationships between the characters. Nii seemed somewhat emotional, but I tend to chalk that up to being around, and outclassed by, Koumyo. While I wonder about the others after the previous chapter, I can see this one is necessary for advancing the plot. Again, I'll keep my fingers crossed that the mess with the mag gets straightened out soon. Hopefully RL will give you a break asap.
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 18:07 CDT
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It ended on such a high emotional point, waiting will prove most difficult. Despite the dangers and subsequent suffering, I cheered Gojyo on in his final rebellion. I can only hope Jien will still be okay when all is said and done. I feel the timing of Sanzo's was perfect far as the story goes. I'll have to curb my impatience while I wait for an update now, but I know RL takes priority. (Yes, it would be nice if we could turn a buck for fanfics.) I'll definitely keep my fingers crossed that this work out for you.
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Reviewed By: yukitok On: June 21, 2005 21:45 CDT
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Sorry I was in japan for two weeks and had limited net access, but I sure missed this story! Keep it up! YAY! Hakkai hasn't given up!
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Reviewed By: Christal On: June 21, 2005 17:52 CDT
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As usual, I love it, Rory!!! Do not worry about rushing to get updates in, I understand about the lack of time between work and (attempting to have a) life!!! Got a question, but I'll send an e-mail for it! ^-^
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Reviewed By: EriK aka Poe On: June 19, 2005 23:27 CDT
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Again, you've done an amazing job (despite your [offline] issues); I'm anticipating what I hope will be Hakkai growing balls & doing what he knows is right. *chuckle*
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 22:01 CDT
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I can honestly say these chapters haven't suffered despite the problems RL is tossing at you. I'm happy to see there's some hope for Jien, as well as finally having the whole story on how Sanzo fits into this. Though personally, I don't think I can get through a chapter now without wishing some horrible, painful, and slow death for Gyumao. I hope that problem with your magazine straightens out for you, and I don't say that just to get quickter updates. It sounds like they're really pulling a boner, which sucks big time.
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Reviewed By: MajaLi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 05:45 CDT
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Wow, this is really good! It's fascinating how you've dealt with all the questions that artificial (or maybe not so much so!) intelligence raises; thank you soooooo much for the frequent & prompt updates, and I'm really looking forward to reading more! *hugs* MajaLi
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Reviewed By: Christal On: June 14, 2005 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, I LOVE IT!!! I just wish that Hakkai wasn't so thick right now!!! Can't wait for more of this fic and Fire and Earth!!! ^-^
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