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Reviewed By: ~xeriah On: June 13, 2005 21:09 CDT
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V. nice that, esp Gojyo's "little death" during the act of lovemaking. Now, however is Gojyo going to be saved of Gyumao once and for all so that he can spend the rest of his days lazing in the arms of Hakkai?
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 19:27 CDT
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It seems Jien's fate is inevitable, no matter how I'm probably right with Gojyo wishing that weren't the case. At this point, a knife in Gyumao's back, (or front, take your pick), would make me and probably a lot of others really happy. And Goku's right, Hakkai's dense. Though I enjoyed the scene between him and Gojyo. Least Gojyo finally knows the difference between the abuse og Gyumao and real love.
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 19:08 CDT
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Ouch. Ouch, I say. And all I can do at this point is hope somehow even Jien can get fixed, because it's all so terribly sad at this point for both of them. Though personally, I would like to smack Kou a couple. Really, evil is evil, regardless of blood ties. (But I'm probably in the few who can say that and mean it.) It's reaching a decided pinnacle that's leaving me clutching my chair and really hoping the next part comes soon, or as soon as RL will let you.
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Reviewed By: EriK (aka) Poe On: June 11, 2005 02:30 CDT
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I'm looking forward to more of this tale; as someone stated before, having patience is hard, considering your storylines are so interesting and keeps one on the edge of their seat. *chuckle* Hope the internet connection works out for you.
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 19:50 CDT
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Finally, Hakkai's balls dropped. Took him long enough. The part where Jien mentioned his dying has me curious; I do wonder what he means with that. The interaction between him and Gojyo is both heart-wrenching yet hopeful, and it's wonderful to see Jien caring for him in such a manner. Now if only someone would stick a knife in Gyumaou... You have my sympathy with the internet troubles. (Oh boy do I know how that goes.) Trust me, even when we say we're impatient, the (good) readers will definitely wait for you.
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Reviewed By: ~Xeriah On: June 10, 2005 19:17 CDT
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Awesome! I was looking forward to the update on this story and so glad to see it. Seeing the connection b/n Gojyo and Jien was really wonderful, v. touching, and also knowing that Hakkai is doing his damndest to save Gojyo makes my heart flutter. The twist of emotions here is beautifully done, as always :)
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Reviewed By: ~Xeriah On: May 30, 2005 00:15 CDT
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so sad what's happening to gojyo and really interesting this new character, the one he was cloned from i presume? wow, gymao(sp?) is def an evil chara w/o morals. now what's hakkai going to do? or gojyo or this new chara? looking fwd to more!
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 22:18 CDT
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Frustrated? Okay, I admit, maybe just a tiny bit impatient. I always am with good fics. Can't help it. I knew Gyumao got those cells through underhanded means, but I did not see that coming. And just--ouch. Both chapters just cause a painful heart spasm. For both Gojyos, that sucks. Is it wrong to wish for a slow and painful death for Gyumao now? Least Chin got duly "rewarded". Well now, Hakkai can't just wallow in misery, and Gojyo can't stay there, so I'll (try very hard to) be patient and see how things go in the next part. -LN
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Reviewed By: Yukitok On: May 27, 2005 19:28 CDT
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Beautiful Darling....Keep it up! gambate ne!
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 18:11 CDT
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Gojyo's too kind-hearted for his own good. I say the other three should've ripped Chin's throat out, personally. Ah, Thursday seems so far away now. The pace of this is quite an achievement, as you manage to let it flow quickly yet without that rushed feeling I've noticed can sometimes happen. The reader is taken along every step instead of left behind and wondering how it jumped to point c from point a. Now if only someone will smack Hakkai upside the head a few times. But I'll just wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: xeriah not logged in On: May 26, 2005 02:39 CDT
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Steadily getting more intense and one can tell that all will soon explode. Everyone will have much grief coming to them when it does and the readers will be waiting anxiously for each installment. Thanks for steady updates and will wait when you get a chance to post next.
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 19:01 CDT
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Hakkai handled that surprisingly well, lucky so n' so. Though I found myself cheering Gojyo on with his jealousy, as it seems that it and his anger may be the only thing to save him at this point. Now if no one minds, I'll be in the corner, grinding my teeth while wishing for a truck to hit Chin. The plot overall is moving along nicely, and I look forward to the next part.
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Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: Jeda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 08:12 CDT
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Didn't read the fics for quite a while. I read the whole chapters in one shot. Interesting, something different from the usual fics. Let's see what's goin to happen... Oh yes...one more thing. Writing style? Amazing.
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 18:54 CDT
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In a word, crap. Crappity crap crap. That came out of nowhere and just slaps one right in the face. I thought there'd be a little more time before Chin found out, but that just blindsided me. And if Hakkai didn't feel like a heel before, I'm sure he does now. Funny how the same logic from Kwannon just seems skewed coming from him. Now I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, fearing yet anticipating how that's going to play out.
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Reviewed By: Christal On: May 23, 2005 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, GREAT! (Although being a HUGE Gojyo x Hakkai fan may have made me biased...) I cannot wait to read more!! Ignore those who critisize you, I know good writing and a good author when I see one!! (Readaholic) Thanx for allowing me the enjoyment of your skills!!!!
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