| "Marionette" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for contacting me with the update. Kwannon was ever so cute herself here, opening up about liking Gojyo and wanting to protect him. Ahhh, and Chin Yissou. Slimy bastard. *scowls* I can imagine all sorts of trouble coming out of his appearance and all the ways in which he can manipulate Hakkai. It's starting to look more and more dangerous for our boys....
|
Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 18:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was waiting for the fly in the ointment to appear, only it turned out to be a cockroach. Things don't look well for Hakkai's odd family. And I get the feeling it's going to turn a lot worse before getting remotely better. Wonderful explanation with Kwannon. I was close to writing her off as spiteful, but her reasoning not only made perfect sense, but proved touching in retrospect.
|
Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 01:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you, i love you for posting more! I keep checking back regularly for more chapters so I guess I'm just going to keep an eye on the Saiyuki LJ list for your updates. Wow, so funny. I love your sense of humor. Kwannon and Jiroushin are delightful. Totally digging Goku's presence in the story and now kinda wondering if Sanzo will be making a show or not. More than anything, Goyjo and Hakkai are totall "awwww!" material. What a sweet, beautiful love story, tho I sense the entering of darkness from Gyumaoh. ahhhhhhh, I'm waiting so anxiously!
|
Reviewed By: YukitoK On: May 22, 2005 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry you haven't gotten more reviews. People don't know what they're missing if they are not reading this fic. Keep going! I believe in you!
|
Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excuse me while I clean pepsi off my monitor from where I laughed it out. Well at least Hakkai knows Gojyo's functioning normally in that regard. I think Goku adds a lot to the clone group dynamics, but sheesh, one line and I'm ready to toss Kwannon in the grinder myself. I can only hope someone smacks her back into place before this is through.
|
Reviewed By: YukitoK On: May 20, 2005 23:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is very interesting...please continue!
|
Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can honestly say that I didn't see the exact nature of Goku's role in this coming. And yet, it's oddly apropos and fitting with the direction of the story. And it still seems the bear is playing a pivotal role, though I can't guess what at this point. I'm once again highly entertained by the antics and interaction between Gojyo and Jiroushin. The TV scene was hilarious. It will be interesting to see which direction Gojyo grows from here.
|
Reviewed By: guanyin-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG This is so well written. Funny, tender, emotionally charged. No matter what you do with it, it is already one of my favourites I have ever read. Please update the rest of the chapters as soon as you can!!
|
Reviewed By: Perverted Critic On: May 20, 2005 07:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello, minna! Nice fic! The concept is interesting although it is developing kinda slow. But taking care of writing all the small details like you did is really admirable. I got a very sunny, warm feeling from your fic! Please, continue.^.^b I wonder if Gogyo "the marrionette" will meet or get confused with the Gogyo "the actor of the show Saiyuki"? It would certainly be hillarious! Having your own double is quite common for actors and sometimes it is needed in terms of protection. That could certainly be a good idea for the plot development, don't you think? By the way, that mutilated monkey is Goku? And where is Sanzo? I hope you'll update this story soon! :-)
|
Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 06:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now I'm curious about the third voice, and "Teddy's" role. It appears something is to be going on. I enjoyed how Gojyo's managed to come along, and find the interaction with Jiroushin touching. Kwannon is hilarious and very much fitting her cat role. I can imagine it's not going to go well when Gyumao comes to collect his 'doll'. Looking forward to more, especially seeing how Gojyo further develops.
|
Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 05:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh god, that's so sweet. I adore this so much, both Gojyo and Hakkai's personalities and the way Gojyo is growing on Hakkai. The little we see of Hakkai's past is sad and it's so sweet the way Gojyo reacts even tho he doesn't know what happened. I adore these two more than ever now.
|
Reviewed By: amythestmagelo On: May 19, 2005 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
At least from the first chapter, the story seems intriguing. And though my opinion probably won't matter much (lowly reader that I am), please do continue.
|
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: May 19, 2005 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woo! Another fic by you, you rock!! If I weren't so lazy and adverse to stalking, I still wouldn't stalk you. But I will happily continue to read your fics. And yes, this fandom is so much cooler. I mean, hello, demons and all!! ~_^ Keep up the cool writing. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: kibachan On: May 19, 2005 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know what I think, but I'll leave a review anyway. I can't wait to see how Hakkai takes care of Gojyo and teaches him about the world... :D I'm afraid to see Gojyo hurt if Gyumaoh gets ahold of him, so I'm rooting for Hakkai to protect him, but it's your story. Update soon!
|
Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's certainly off to a good and amusing start. Though I'm alreday fearful of what will happen to Gojyo if Hakkai hands him over. I look forward to seeing how this will go.
|
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
