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Title: updateupdateupdate
Reviewed By: volpa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 00:04 CDT
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Shippou reminds me of the dude who used to sell my ass back in the 80s. I can't wait until you get to the part where he hits Kagome with an open hand!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Oh My God LOL* you need to keep writing I got to see how this plays out LOL.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 13:55 CDT
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Eep! Write more, this is good ^_^
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG -hilarity at its best. ::laughs:: definately best parody i have ever read, so far. i think i will favorite this. lol.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 01:02 CDT
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lol it's good
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Title: Just Fine
Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: May 23, 2005 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sick, but very cute, little parody. Kind-of kitsune as ferengi if you'll excuse the term (in all of its aspects). Shippou is always a real suspect to me...
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Title: Watch closely as the point goes right over their heads
Reviewed By: Somnambulicious (lazy) On: May 22, 2005 23:27 CDT
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I must admit, I'm curious about the psychopathology that would lead someone to review each of your stories as soon as they pop up and to prove in those reviews - every single time - that she just doesn't get it. If she's trying to make an ass of herself, it's working. At first it was just mildly irritating, but now I find myself embarrassed for poor Ithilwen. Perhaps she isn't familiar with the definition of parody: A literary or artistic work that imitates the characteristic style of an author or a work for comic effect or ridicule. Then again, she proved from the very beginning of her review that the entire point of the fic was lost on her, so perhaps knowing the dictionary definition of parody isn't enough. "Mother" as title was the crux of the parody, and if she thinks you're too stupid to know such basic rules of grammar, then why is she even bothering to review? Of course, it would also help if she knew something about kitsune behavior and realized that it is Youko Kurama in this fic, not Shuichi Minamino (clue: this is taking place 500 years in the past.) Scratch that. This is a PARODY. A PARODY. The characterization is an essential part of the parody. If someone can't grasp at least that much, then she has no business reading it.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!!! ^_^ great story too
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 13:39 CDT
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^^ Heh. Shippo, you are a conniving little boy. This is really good, and Youko's pretty in character. Yeah. ^^
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 12:28 CDT
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Words like Mother and Sister should not be capitalized when used with possessive pronouns. They should only be capitalized if they're titles. (Shippo's mother, her sister. Mother Teresa, Sister Clarine.) ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ Somehow I can't see even Super-Yummy Kurama acting this way. Your story leaves me to wonder where our infamously jealous Inuyasha is, why Shippo, who often yelled at Inuyasha for being a two-timer, would think that Kagome getting a one-night stand would be a good thing, and why Kagome would agree to sleep with a stranger, even one like Kurama. ~~~~ However, if the purpose of this 'fic is to showcase Shippo's apt and adorable skills of negotiation, then bravo, for you have hit the nail on it's fuzzy-eared head.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 10:34 CDT
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Oh God I love it! lmao Always knew Shippo was acting a bit too Innocent. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Moon Child (nsi) On: May 22, 2005 09:15 CDT
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*blink* Uhhhhhh....wow...ummm....damn....umm....I have nothing of great intellegence to say....
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste (Not logged in) On: May 22, 2005 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny, Very funny.*giggles uncontrolable* Dying to know what's in those three pouchs and what exactly this seeming ritual that passed between Youko and Shippou was. Love to know how Youko came across Kagome and Shippou and just were Inubaka was at the time. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious (lazy) On: May 22, 2005 01:08 CDT
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*giggles and rolls* This fic has WINNER written ALL OVER IT, and YOU KNOW IT!* *Reviewer not responsible for unwary readers not getting in-joke. All rights reserved. Copyright 2005, Snail Pr0n Productions.
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