| "Hiei's Other Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!Man this is so funny.I couldn't stop laughing!Please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really really good but you need to make the chappies MUCH MUCH longer.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm interesting please updaet soon.
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Title: Parings
Reviewed By: fireshadowfox On: October 21, 2006 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the pairings should be Hiei/Sango Yoko/Kagome/Kurama Fluff-butt/oc shippo/rin (come on you got to love that pairing!)Yuske/oc3 kuwabara/oc2 (He needs someone!)I think fluffy-sama should be with this caractor. Oc1- Name: sasori Age:459 (fluffy is 5??.)Hight:3in. under sessy.Gender:girl DUH! Speice: Cat demon. Hair:Lavender/blue eyes:gold/red markings:4 strips on L cheek 2 on R. Past: Abandoned by family, strong fighter, toke over central lands, knows alcamist,lightning demon. Oc2: Name: airrin, Hair, orange, eyes, green Spieces: human with high ,spiritual power/baka potentual, clueless.Past lives with sister, who is alcamist. Oc3:Name:Aden, Eyes:change with mood. spices:half demon,works for oc1 who is like koenma, wepons:spirt blades(like ed's from FMA, alcamy,hand-to-hand.,atitude, meet sango when they were little and was traind with her to be a tanjiya. Family:Airrin.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 04:10 CST
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Yusuke/Keiko Kurama/Kagome/Youko Kuwabara/Yukina Hiei/Sango Koenma/Botan Sesshoumaru/Rin Miroku/Shizuru Oh yeah miss one. Kouga/Ayame Kuwabara's Sister name is Shizuru. Yukina is Hiei's Twin Sister. Oh and is Inu dead?
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 04:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Yusuke/Keiko Kurama/Kagome/Youko Kuwabara/Yukina Hiei/Sango Koenma/Botan Sesshoumaru/Rin Miroku/Shizuru Kuwabara's Sister name is Shizuru. Yukina is Hiei's Twin Sister.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 31, 2005 20:37 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon. VOTING- BOTON- Koenma, RIN- Shippo, YUKINA- Kuwabara, SANGO- Hiei, KAGOME- Kurama, SESSHO-MARU- Shiziru, KOENMA- Boton, YUSUKE- Keiko.
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Reviewed By: matzes1 On: July 08, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!! Hiei is related to Yusuke, great idea. MORE CHAPTERS, PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 04:01 CDT
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Oh by the way Kagome/Kurama Sango/Fluffy(cant spell his name)Hiei/boton koenma/yukina.If kur/kago don't work than koga/kagome(other wise Me!!!J/K)XDtee heehee Love ya's,Shyzona
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE(no logd in) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 03:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep it up.Got a good plot there.would hav had gome fightin another demon and her dad take shippo away from her.and the chappies be a little longer.but other than that nothin else to fix.toatally cool.love it update soon please!?!?
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Title: Dude
Reviewed By: ShihanKitsune On: June 27, 2005 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay i definitly like kurama/kagome and hiei/sango the others i don care. by the way this is awsom. if kurama/kagome don work than you can add bankotsu or hiten into da stori. the explinashin for the title is dude dis is awsom. SORRY FOR MY BAD SPELLING! i would be a member but i CAN'T!!!! man it sucks to be underage.T_T
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I vote....... youko/kagome/kurama yusuke/keiko koga/botan (just read FEMALE INUYASHA's review...) shizuru/sesshoumaru kuwabara/(um..... get back on that....^_^*) hiei/sango miroku/yukina (um..... last minute idea.... was thinking botan though....) Just PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP and make it a Youko/Kagome/Kurama(Suichi)!!!!^_^ PS: Love the story! ^_~ ~Tsuki-tora
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Title: votes
Reviewed By: Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 01:08 CDT
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Damn I can't decide who to vote for Kagome, but, since its a crossover I would have to say Kurama... Yus-Keiko, Sango-Hiei, Miroku-Yukina, (Hiei's not going to like that one, Sesshomaru-Shiziru (sp? Kuwabara's sister), Kouga-Ayame. The story is rather cute and I'm hoping you continue it hopefully including why was Shippo in the clutches of his grandfather.
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Title: Pairing
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:28 CDT
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I would like an H/K pairing if you will please, their my faverite...woooooooooo!...sry...Well, your story is really good and you should keep wrighting it...please don't abonden it....pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzz!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hiei's Other Sister
Reviewed By: Sakura411 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the pairings should be: YUSUKE/KEIKO KURAMA/KAGOME HIEI/SANGO SESHOMARU/RIN KOENMA/SHIZURU YUKINA/KOUGA BOTON/MIROKU I can't think of one for Kuwabara though. Anyways your story is great so far. Hope you finish the next chapter soon. Ja-Ne!
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