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| "This is Not My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: This Is Not My Life 28
Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: October 27, 2009 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's always so sad to revisit just how much not an adolescent Omi is. Ken is the only opportunity for something decent he's ever had. So Omi is rattled and distracted during a mission, desperate to not lose the best thing that's ever happened to him. Your writing is so amazing, Sky Rat, one couldn't be sure how it was going to turn out until it was all over. Two people in that room were going to die. But which two? Immobilised by fear, the professional killer in Omi took over and stopped the threat, and the target, in its tracks. Ken may undoubtedly be injured, but not dead. Mission accomplished. Not dead. Not dead.
| Title: this is not my life chpt 27
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: October 26, 2009 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! not a drill in Ken's hand. This story continues to be incredible, it is so very, very good and well written also. More soon please.
| Title: 27 can you tell the difference
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: September 28, 2009 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, it is so funny and cute the way Aya is processing he and Yohji's new relationship. So damn well written, I'm envious.
| Reviewed By: glinwulf On: September 22, 2009 22:32 CDT
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What a great new chapter! I loved it. So glad you haven't let this drop.
| Title: This Is Not My Life #27
Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: September 16, 2009 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm practically foaming at the mouth with sympathy for Aya. He is making a lot of very brave choices, for his own good, and trying to do what will make Yohji happy, too, and all he can think is that he is 'selfish'! I can't get over how well you have these two in your sights and keep them so in character, even as they do things that are OOC. You're such an exciting author to read, I keep coming back for more and more, and that's not even to mention that this story is my BFF. Please don't plan to end it any time soon! I love this story!!
| Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 06:45 CDT
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Yeah progress on both fronts!! Lol I love Manx, she's one of my favorite charachters but homegirl should get the worst timing of the year award. Anyway please update again soon!!
| Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story and the wonderful way you have captured the essence of the Weiss guys makes me hope that it will go on forever. It makes me laugh, it makes me cry, it makes me green with envy at the skill with which you write. Never stop writing about the Weiss, Schwarz characters because you have them down to a T. Inner dialogue is wonderful and the interactions between all of them, not just Aya and Yohji is absolutley perfect, You sure you are not one of the original authors?
| Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 06:42 CDT
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Sex! Ok did Omi and Ken get it on yet? When is Aya going to wack up? Love the story it's pretty intresting mental issues always are. update soon.
| Reviewed By: layla-xd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuuuuuuui finally, finally they both got it right and slept together! *grins like a maniac* Of course the lemon is not the only reason why I enjoyed this chapter so much, but it definitely was a bonus. It´s just so great to finally have them together. At least in a physical way. But this was a huge step for both, epecially after Aya said that he wanted to repeat it, too... Yay! Oh, but to me the best scene was in the hot springs. Aya´s being invitive, touching Yohji and all, and all the time this strange blonde is there, too... He kinda scared me. I mean, italian rap?! I know Italian pop music (which is quite bad in my opinion), Italian opera and Italian Gothic/Metal music (which is pretty good^^), but I´ve never heard of italian rap... did you have a special group or artist in mind when you wrote this? Or did you just come up with something probably very unusual? Anyways, Yohji was so sweet in this chapter... he was so hesitant (he just could´nt believe this really happened, could he?^^) and kept Aya asking... Made me want to hug him. And it´s also great that Aya told Yohji of his sister. Not the whole story, but at least he _did_ tell him. Maybe more will follow, who knows... So, I really really enjoyed this chapter, I´m looking forward to the next one! You´re such an awesome writer, keep it up!
| Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this so much. You have captured these guys to a T. Thoroughly amazing writing. Great story.
| Title: This Is Not My Life #25
Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: June 30, 2009 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 25 was awesome! Finally, finally they get down to a point of intimacy that neither is having forced on him. I've followed this story from the beginning and I so admire the author's patience, which of course was very frustrating to me. But getting them there and in the right head space was a feat. I don't think it could have been written better by anyone else. Yohji's cynicism/sarcasm may have been brought out by anyone in his past but only Aya could fill that deep hole in him and renew his self-confidence. "You were the one I was looking for", indeed. For all their lives, these two have been each other's answer. This story rocks, Sky Rat. Hope there's more to come, but this chapter was just perfect if it's the last one. Thanks for sharing your vision of my favourite pairing. Thank you, thank you, thank you for the lemon.
| Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I love this story and the POV of each character. Your writing is superb, thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks for sharing your genius with us. Trudy
| Title: This is not my life chpt 23
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: February 20, 2009 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and your ability to capture the Weiss guys so perfectly. Very well written and so enjoyable. Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: glinwulf On: February 19, 2009 22:48 CST
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Poor yohji! I hope Aya comes back before Yohji does something stupid.
| Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: February 19, 2009 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First Aya comes to terms with his attraction for Yohji, but still needs Aya-chan's input. Then Yohji thinks Aya's gone for good. This is so frustrating and confusing. I wish they could just meet in the middle and get on with it. They are both so messed up, there's no way for them to be saved except by each other. Sky-Rat, your writing is excellent. You are a great storyteller and I love this story, but I am going crazy waiting for a meeting of the minds and hearts these two men have. I think they need each other, whether they stay with Weiss or not.
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