| "This is Not My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 31, 2008 18:09 CDT
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another great chapter! loved Aya's self-discovery.
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The decent into profanity by Aya is very logical. As he reasons out his feelings so unwillingly it is very real that he might lose control enough to start swearing. I absolutely LOVE the way you write the Weiss boys, it is so logical and real, each POV is the true tone of thinking that I would imagine each kitten engages in. So darn well done. Thank you for that it is a great piece fo writing. tutyfrty
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Title: This is not my life
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: October 26, 2008 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful gift from the author. The POV of each of the Weiss' Kittens is so on the mark. A very enjoyable story, I just hope that Yohji and Aya find that they are good for each other and find some peace of mind.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 26, 2008 00:05 CDT
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was having an frustratingly awful end to an otherwise pretty good day and prayed for just one, brief, decent weiss story to calm me down so I could sleep, and the first place I looked I found your new chapter. thank you--I needed that. love the bits of honesty about their pasts coming out here.
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Reviewed By: BLG On: October 18, 2008 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoy this fic immensely. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Glinwulf On: October 18, 2008 00:52 CDT
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Yay! Another chapter! I really enjoy this fic, though I'm eager to get back to Yohji and Aya. I'm glad Omi and Ken have finally gotten their signals straight. (Or is that NOT straight?)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 11:34 CDT
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poor ken, denial!
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Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: March 03, 2008 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating! I enjoyed Ken's mental dialogue, and have the utmost sympathy for him. He's about as straight arrow as they come, and it is freaking him out to discover his interest in Omi. I just can't see Omi as being unaware of what he's doing to Ken. He's acting like he likes him, but not pressing the issue, but Ken hasn't quite come to his moment of truth that his feelings are returned. Excellent writing!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 12:11 CDT
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wow. Just...wow. I'm so glad you write. I'll sit here and wait (sorta) patiently for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: slowglass On: September 13, 2007 10:31 CDT
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I really enjoyed chapter 18. I particularly liked that Aya gave Yohji the key to his psyche, and was then shocked that he used it. I also liked that Yohji's first response, after figuring out that Aya had a problem that he couldn't or wouldn't speak about, was to try to figure out how he could help. Both these responses seemed very in character to me. At the risk of offending Ken/Omi fans everywhere, I hope that they won't get the entire next chapter to themselves. Aya and Yohji seem as though something resembling communication might actually occur; I'd like to see the momentum continue there. Thanks for sharing this story with us. Looking forward to your next update.
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Title: Yay for More!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 19:35 CDT
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Wow, you actually make me enjoy the Omi scenes while waiting for 'my' guys! More?
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 11:57 CDT
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Yay! Update! Finally. I think you did well with Omi's internal voice. Very well done.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 10:26 CDT
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Ahh, love is a sort of mental illness. I really like how you counter point each couple's angst and struggles to understand. And I adore your Ken and Omi.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 13:08 CDT
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Yohji is so charming when he's floundering. I love this!
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Title: ohh...
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 23:36 CDT
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I love the way you write Yohji! I kept snickering, but it was...touching, too. Well done!
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