| "This is Not My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfsonNSI On: December 27, 2005 13:03 CST
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Ah, back to the back-and-forth quibbling you write so well. I honestly thought you intended to end the fic with the drunken "you're a blond" scene and I can't tell you how happy I am you decided to keep going. I love how the road trip mimics their personalities and feelings : Yohji with a rough idea of what he wants, but easily sidetracked, Aya wanting a definate course but having no idea where to go. And it must be love, only Yohji would think Aya looked good in that orange sweater.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:54 CST
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Ooh! Fun chapter, evil cliffhanger! Well written, as always. Very much looking forward to more! Remember...you can never have too much Aya and Yohji!
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: December 26, 2005 08:32 CST
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Moooooooorrrrreeeeeeeee! Now!....please?
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Reviewed By: tingel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 08:13 CST
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I stumbled over this out of boredom. Man, did I get hooked! I absolutely love your story. The plot derieves beautifully from your characterisations and those are really original. And besides all that I like your style of writing! I'll be checking here for more. Neglect your knitting project a bit longer, I want more!
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Title: YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 00:56 CST
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*screams with Aya and Yohji* AAAIEEEEEEE!!! *deep breath* Okay, okay, review. Umm *screams some more* Okay. I love how you write Yohji. Poor guy, figuring out he's got a "thing" for Aya when he's (apparently) already completely screwed it up...and the waitress gave him her phone number, hee hee. I can't wait for them camping--if they make it that far!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!! please?
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Reviewed By: Leena On: August 24, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! i really like way u wrote in different perspectives and it just seems different than other fics i read. i guess theres just more feeling. please, update soon bc i cant wait to read more! if its even possible i think im becoming more obessed with weiss fics!
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Title: HURRAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 21:44 CDT
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I admit it, I thought it was done, that you weren't going to come back ever, and I was depressed but here it is, and it's great, and yes, please, another Yohji chapter!!!! Soon, please, please, pretty please?
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 22:13 CDT
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interesting story....i like it...and i like the history behind yohji....keep writing....
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Title: definitely not their life
Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 01:25 CDT
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funny fic, this one. i hope you can get around to finishing it, because things are getting curious-er and curious-er( why can't the original series be a tad more funny, like this one?). but then again, i do know it's hard finishing a fic, so... yes well anyway i'm rambling here, so basically all i wanted to say
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Reviewed By: Pix On: June 14, 2005 19:21 CDT
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This is excellent - original and engaging. Please finish this!
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just sat and read this in one sitting. This is a truely excellent fic. I hope that there will be more chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 05, 2005 01:36 CDT
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I am thrilled to find this fic again. I adore the voices you have given Aya and Yohji. The matter of fact way they think about their fanstasy lives is just... perfect. I'm looking forward to the chapters ahead.
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Reviewed By: KD On: June 03, 2005 23:01 CDT
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Still reading. Still enjoying. Chapter four.
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Reviewed By: KD On: June 03, 2005 22:54 CDT
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I'm reading. Just wanted you to know that. Now leave me alone. 'Cause I'm ENJOYING, too. ;)
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