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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *love* this fic! You are so awesome. :D It's hilarious and sweet and insightful... I especially love the Aya/Yohji interaction, and how funny both their voices are. The chapter in which Ken beaned Omi with the soccer ball nearly made me piss my pants. PLEASE don't stop updating. I will shrivel and die if you do. And believe me, I'll be checking back often to see if you've added another chappie! Peace out, and good luck! o_~
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 06:06 CDT
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And then what happens?! I have to know will Yoji make any progress on the Aya front and will Omi start believing in Ken!? Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 11:20 CDT
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Wow, what a great chapter. The closing was absolutely marvelous. They should get 4 cats!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 21:10 CDT
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Sky Rat, I forgive you for a non-Aya/Yohji chapter. well done. The one good thing about how slow you write, is I keep getting astounded at how well you do it.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 16:38 CDT
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the cat scene was soo cute...*crossing fingers and hoping you update soon*
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 01:01 CDT
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Aw! That was sweet! I'm glad to see communication improving between the Ken and Omi, in its own way. I'm glad you updated! This is a great story and I hope that you'll be inspired for future chapters soon! Hope you enjoy the rest of your vacation!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 18:17 CDT
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Awwwww. That was just adorable.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 15:01 CDT
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That must be one of the sweetest declarations of love I've ever read. I adore this fic and all the boys' fumbling towards happiness.
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Reviewed By: gossamerisred On: March 06, 2006 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this! Its been so long since I found something so light hearted and lovely :3 please! update this, it is wonderful ^^
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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aww yay! i love the whole fairy tale aspect and that you stick with it. poor ayan, so confused. he needs to lighten up and let yoji do him. hee. and i LOVE yoji's boxers! it's so fitting! i like how you write them. write more! update faster! *gives you cookies* =^^=
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 13:12 CST
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I just love the interaction you've created between Yohji and Aya, and I'm looking forward to reading more (hint...what hint? *g*)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 13:02 CST
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woohoo! you updated, I must admit i found the update on ff.net first (needless to say MM.org) didn't show me so i had to go and look for it. And yohji finally kissed aya. sheesh. and it was aya's first kiss. bwhaaa. love it. update soon. (you can ignore ken and omi)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 12:34 CST
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I'm sorry, I just don't believe your sister can be so incredibly much more talented than you. Sky Rat, this is wonderful. Your characters are completely in character, yet surprising and unpredictable as real people. Your plot grows naturally out of your characters, and it's just wonderful. I love this chapter, and I will read it again and again while I wait for the next chapter. I will probably even enjoy Ken and Omi, because you write them delightfully as well. (squashes whines for more Aya/Yohji) Thank you for this terrific chapter!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 31, 2005 16:59 CST
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i'm so glad you're working on this again. even if it's going to be months between updates, you cliffhanger-abuser.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 16:58 CST
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okay so now that you've updated, you know you have to keep updating right? right?!?
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