| "Pain Don't Mean a Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 03:10 CDT
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LUV IT!!!! But not happey a kagomes additude shes sooooooo o/o/c......Well anyway keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You SERIOUSLY have to work on your spelling and punctuation. Btw, it's spelled Yusuke, not Yuske. Keiko, not kayko. Sorry for that. Well, anyways your story is great and enjoyable to me but i had to clear that up. You should get spell check or sumtin, it helps wit the commas, too. You don't put commas before and after names when they're mentioned in sentences or in many of the places you put them. Sorry 'bout ranting, but i had to clear that up. Sry. Ja Ne! keep it up.
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 21:48 CDT
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very different from the usual..sorda but will there be any lemons? i hope you update soon!
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Title: Contest eh?
Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, I'm really enjoying it. But this contest of annoying you to write chapters, it's still on right? Cause I deal with 3000 teenagers daily, I know how to annoy. (Evil gleam in eyes and rubbs hands togther. 'So much fun, yes so much fun...muhhahahahaha')
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 00:54 CST
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-.- I wont forget!!!!! 2 boxes!!! I am the DOI! (duck of insanity, school joke thus far) YOU SPAMMED ME! NYAH! the online is better though right?
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: crazed-neko313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dammit you duck of insanity! *throws random objects plus the rabid jaken* write more and bring me my pocky!!! you forget it and ill kill you!!!...wow im going insane...(like you havent noticed but oh well)
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: crazed-neko313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! i love the song 'scars' u rule!!!
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: crazed-neko313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn you cant see the bunny i made...T.T
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: crazed-neko313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more dammit!!! lol (Y) (oo) (")(")
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: crazed-neko313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this kinda seems like deja vu all over again... didn't i read this at school? hmmmmmm... oh well this is a good story anyway! bye! from usagi ^.^
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 11:53 CST
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Great chapter update!!!!! I can't wait untill the next one comes out!
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 15:09 CST
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How 'bout this... you write, I review and everyone's happy! YAY! That's just my more hyper way of saying that I like your story ^^
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Hiei/Kagome\Kurama|Youko OR Kagome/Kurama|Youko
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 19:16 CST
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Hiei/Kagome\Kurama|Youko OR Kagome/Kurama|Youko
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 18:48 CST
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Hiei/Kagome\Kurama|Youko OR Kagome/Kurama|Youko
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