| "The Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 147 ] |
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Title: Paperclips
Reviewed By: hiei1969 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 02:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! Keep up the good work! And I think the finders keepers rule applies to your pens now ^_^
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God you need to update fast!!!!!!!!!!!please And by the way do you know wh I didn't get an e-mail saying you updated is the sitre not doing it anymore?
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 04, 2005 17:33 CDT
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Hope you update soon, this is getting good. I like that Kazuma was the one to find her. I hope Hiei is the one to gut Kikyo like a pinyata.
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 13:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update very soon, I want to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I REALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!WOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: July 21, 2005 20:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
and is she ever. I'm curious about the pairings, if there will be any. Could you enlighten my curiosity?
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 05:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is tasty. I'm looking forward to an update! :)
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Reviewed By: AzureDragon On: July 10, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you portray the story. I dont read to many cross overs but this one looks verry promising and i cant wait to read more!! And your wrightign seems to flow relay well
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it despite the grammar problems. I hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 17:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes! An update! I love updates! ^-^ Great job, hope to see another update soon! ^_~
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Reviewed By: italiannproud [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm rather surprised at how this story has come to be told. It really is a good story line and has great potential to get better. I, too, found it interesting how you connected the Reikai Tentai and Kagome, and I will love to see how Kurama and Hiei are brought into the story. Please continue. I have some critiques, but I would like to read furthur on into the story before I hand them out. Most of them are critiques because there are only a couple chapters and it's mainly the absense of more information and interaction, which will come furthur on. Again, please continue.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool story Please update very soon.
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Reviewed By: Becka On: July 06, 2005 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm... can i have something shinie since im reviewing??? Anyways Great Story! Yeah.. I just want the shinie thing... But really great story
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 17:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your story...its not crap...Keep up the good work! PLEEZ UPDATE SOON!
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