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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: sesskags_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome, really amazing. I regret never taking the time to read this before. What a great, well thought out story. I need more, it is just that good. Everyone knows what Kagome is now and I can't wait till she takes out that bitch Kikyo. I like that you didn't make Mukuro all evil in this. I really never thought she had romantic ties to Hiei and could never understand why other authors use her as a threat to their relationship. Please update soon, whether the chapters are shorter or longer, I just look forward to reading more of a wonderfully written story.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) On: February 13, 2006 20:18 CST
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good update. not really lack luster in the least to me. my symapthies i know all to well about losses
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Reviewed By: chezlesea (nsi) On: February 13, 2006 16:29 CST
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Yay, you updated! Now I'm happy! But sad about the whole passing away thing... But... uh... it was a great chap anyway? Yesh, I lurved it. T'was another great chap, from another great authoress! Update whenever you can, I'll be waiting! (Gods, how sad does that sound? Yes, I'll be sitting by the puter, waiting for that e-mail update for your next chap! I have no life...)
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Reviewed By: Kohara On: February 12, 2006 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long chapters r awesome, b/c they take longer to read, and keep us in suspense for the next chapter! I just hope u get the next chapter out soon, cause this is 1 of my fave fics on here! I hope that clay-pot bitch dies! ::growls angrily:: She's a dirty whore! ::snarls:: ::sigh:: But I still luv this story! Hope 2 read more! -Kohara
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Title: chap 7
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 23:47 CST
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i really couldn't say what i like more, they're both benificial. please update soon
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Title: FarVistas
Reviewed By: FarVistas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 20:22 CST
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Oh, and on another note, love the story - and I'm kinda difficult to please. I'll be checking back for sure!
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Title: FarVistas
Reviewed By: FarVistas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 20:21 CST
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ponygirl2112, hm, yeah, noticed that m'self, although I thought the word meant was possibly "dispassionate". Impassive would work too.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 17:31 CST
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YES LONGER CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!! .... ..... Okay now that you have my answer on that all I can say is LOVE IT and waiting impatiently for more!!
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this & can't wait for the next chapter. Just in case I think you have a word choice error in the Kikyou/Yukina conversation, you have impassioned when I think you meant impassive, here are the difinitions of both; impassioned - ardent: characterized by intense emotion; "ardent love"; "an ardent lover"; "a burning enthusiasm"; "a fervent desire to change society"; "a fervent admirer"; "fiery oratory"; "an impassioned appeal"; "a torrid love affair" impassive - having or revealing little emotion or sensibility; not easily aroused or excited; "her impassive remoteness"; "he remained impassive, showing neither interest in nor concern for our plight"- Nordhoff & Hall; "a silent stolid creature who took it all as a matter of course"-Virginia Woolf; "her face showed nothing but stolid indifference" deadpan: deliberately impassive in manner; "deadpan humor"; "his face remained expressionless as the verdict was read" Hope this helps.
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Reviewed By: etsuko On: January 07, 2006 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude finish now or i will unleash my evil dragon on you and have you eaten alive. seriously i love it and i really want you to finish this storie. i can't wait.
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Title: Either way
Reviewed By: Woobaby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That chapter really left me on the edge of my seat!!!! I wanted to cry when Kagome got pinned to the tree. I also wanted to cry for Hiei!!! I can't wait to see the end of this fight… As to the poll, either way is fine. Your writing is so engrossing, that no matter how long the chapter we want more as soon as it's over!!!
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Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome, really amazing. I regret never taking the time to read this before. What a great, well thought out story. I need more, it is just that good. Everyone knows what Kagome is now and I can't wait till she takes out that bitch Kikyo. I like that you didn't make Mukuro all evil in this. I really never thought she had romantic ties to Hiei and could never understand why other authors use her as a threat to their relationship. Please update soon, whether the chapters are shorter or longer, I just look forward to reading more of a wonderfully written story.
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 19:22 CST
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i would prefer long chapters often, but then again, i am really impatient about people updating, so short, often chapters will work for me...its a really great story!
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Title: Vote
Reviewed By: Zhare [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:19 CST
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I think you should go for shorter chapters. I just started reading this yesterday and I really like it, but I am not looking forward to having to wait a month or more for an update. Also, if you would like someone to beta read your story I would be happy to give it a shot. Please e-mail me at Zhare_z@yahoo.com and let me know.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) On: January 04, 2006 04:19 CST
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OMG great update. Man Kagome is good at the verbal slap. A tongue as sharp as Sesshomarus' claws. This showdown is gonna be something. As for your poll. Do your updates however you see fit. As longa as you don't stop updateing. I would wait months just to get a new chapter. I would be here waiting to read even if the next chapter didn't come out until 2010.
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