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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Kirs On: November 11, 2005 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great. I hope your paperclip is happy. What color is it(the paperclip)?
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Kirs On: November 11, 2005 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Don't die! It's a great fic! And here's a paperclip. *hands reimi-kage a paperclip*
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story!!!! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 20:42 CDT
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damn, this was very, very well written. I am not only entrapped in this story, I am also entangled in the suspence that you have placed all of your readers in. The only thing that I would critic is that I think that you could have gone a little more in depth in the characters emotions. Not Kagome's, you did an excelent job at portraying her. But maybe trying to get across the feeling that the girls must feel about their entrapment, I know that it is very unlikely that they are angered, but fear, defeat, worry, maybe anger at their capture, those are all things that would be good to convey. Or even the feeling of the guys as they are forced to wait while others partake in a battle they have no say in. I know that fighters hate to stand by while their life is in someone elses hand, and that would bring an amazing insight into the characters of this story. Sorry if I have critic to harshly, this really is an amazing story, and I really do hope, and am semi-paitentily waiting, for the text installment.
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Reviewed By: TruStera89 On: October 27, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is awsome, u presive kagome so well. shes strong but not unrealistilly strong like some other storys-beautifly done
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Reviewed By: TruStera89 On: October 27, 2005 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is awsome, u presive kagome so well. shes strong but not unrealistilly strong like some other storys-beautifly done
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Reviewed By: Azzie On: October 26, 2005 18:52 CDT
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That was really mean, and you havnt updated in so long as it is....erggg Please update soon, please please please!
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Reviewed By: Animeian Monkey On: October 25, 2005 16:12 CDT
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Very interesting how you ended the chapter with Kagome pined to a tree by Kikyo just like Inuyasha was. Cann't wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: KrazedKawaiiKitsune On: October 18, 2005 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay you cant just leave off right there its just really mean and rude and not nice. So you really really really need to update beacause this is a reveiw so you can update NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease Finish this. its so great.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 09:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry it's been so long since I reviewed I missed a few updates. In answer to your question from my last review yes you have grammar problems and they are a bit..annoying but it's still not so bad that I can't read the story. Trust me there are stories out there so poorly written it makes your eyes water just trying to make a sentence have a meaning that you understand. The updates are awesome. Does Kikyou really think sealing her to a tree is going to stop her? Kikyou is in for such an ass whiping well I'll pay more atteniton and await further updates
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...evil cliffy....i wonder how the jewel will bring Kagome back. this is one of the best crossovers i have read. please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Woobaby [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 07:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so happy! You FINALLY updated! But I'm also pissed, cos I can't review on FF.net! Aw man, you GOTTA update soon! That is an ebil cliffy... EBIL! Hee hee... too much sugar...
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 22:36 CDT
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OMFG! Did the bitch seal her? Oh, i hope you update soon, i really, really need to know what's going on here. I have to say, though. I'm a firm kikyo backer, and I usually can't stand stories where the author makes kikyo some sort of revenge-driven maniac. However, for some reason, i don't mind when you do it. Completely illogical, yes, but there it is. I suppose it might be because she has had 500 some years to think it over and go more than a little insane. But, whatever it is, it's working for you! Great story!
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