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Title: Vicissitude
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 14:30 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 11:09 CDT
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Awesome chapter! I just got done re-reading it, and wanted to let you know how nicely this chapter flows. Technically speaking, your writing is getting much smoother, and your style is emerging in a lovely way. Storywise I have to say that this is a welcome diversion. Reading something where the characters remain true to their set behaviors is great, and I'm thoroughly enjoying this piece! I can't wait to see where your story is heading; I think that the concept thus far is quite interesting. Hope you update soon!
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Title: chapt. 5
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 07:30 CDT
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Interesting, interesting! I'm loving this incorperating Sesshoumaru and crew into InuYasha's group. I just adore Kagura ^_^ WAAIIII~ for fluffage! Even if it was a sad moment, who can resist a little Yasha/Kagome cuddling ^_~ As usual, the writing itself is gorgeous and I can't wait for more!
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Title: YASHA IS SO HAWT
Reviewed By: melzilla On: September 22, 2005 23:46 CDT
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Okay how messed up is it that I had such a fan girl moment when yasha wa all covered in grave dirt heh and the opening scene?? Ya I think you have everyone perfactly in charactor and it was soooooooooooooooooooooooo funny. And then we have fluff YAY for fluff yasha was so sweet to kagome. I adore fluff I can't wait for the next chapter I so want to see what is gonna happen now that kouga's there. Great chapter! I adored it!
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Title: Told ya so
Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 23:41 CDT
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OK, I really don't like leaving what I have come to term the "duh sherlock" review. The one that says "Great work, keep going" or "I love this fic! Update soon!" etc etc. But the above statements to apply to the greatness that is this fic. I really like it and can't wait to read more. I'd offer to help beta, but I think you've got an awesome one already ^_^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: September 22, 2005 23:15 CDT
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Great update! yay for new chapters; and i was looking for something to do too! hehe. interesting developments. i'm excited to see the fight between sesshiles and kouga...sessh can just run him over but yeah. i love the teasing that kagura keeps insisting upon inu and kag with, it's fun. good chapter and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: September 22, 2005 23:14 CDT
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Really well done! It was great! So Kouga shows up with barred fangs huh? Nice. C
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: September 17, 2005 22:21 CDT
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wow, just wow! I absolutely love your story so far! I'm only sorry that it's taken me so long to start reading it! Well never again, heh, I'll definitely be checking back with you for updates! I have to say, that my eyes were glued to my screen, I am hooked. You write so beautifully and you're right on with the characterization. And I love all the fun little moments you came up with...like Inuyasha kaze no kizu-ing the heck out of the baseball...and poor Mrs. Higurashi's garden! And yasha trying to land on Goshinboku but the branch not being there, even though that happened at a serious time I couldn't help but smile ;) And you, my friend, have the power to make me cry too! lol, i guess I live up to my name though! :p I loved your actions scenes too, only 4 chapters into it and there's already so much happening! I'm definitely curious about the plot and the events that are happening! ::hugs:: i love it!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 19:19 CDT
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hehe! late review for that last chapter... w/o the mm notification for so long... I missed it until you told me it was there! That was a great last chapter!
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 23:19 CDT
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Love this chapter. can't wait to see what happens next. i can almost see what's happening in my mind. please update soon!
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Title: ^.^;;;;;;
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 15:47 CDT
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I'm alive and reading, truely I am! Another promising chapter Sari-mommeh! And WOOHOO I'm the first review since the August update! :dances: I feel special ^_^ I could just feel the heat from the inferno! And yay for that action writing you're always so worried about. I wonder where Naraku is and of course what he's up to this time. I like your byplay with Kagura and Sesshy, even though we only got to see a minute of it. I like InuYasha's moment where he just take a second to watch Kagome fight... somehow I found that to be really sweet. It was a pleasure to read!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vicissitude also means flesh-crafting in certain circles. Anyway, good writing. It feels too early to judge the story itself, but the writing is definitely good and entertaining and stuff.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 01:38 CDT
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yay for updates! nah, there ain't nothing wrong with living in denile! it's cool. sesshiles and kagura though weren't what i saw coming. i really thought sango was gonna bite the bullet in that one. good interveiance. sooo...do all of them get to travel to the future? that would so rock! but...does this mean Naraku is still in the future? is he going to get hit by a bus yet? hehe. good chapter!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 23:45 CDT
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Dang it, I knew something like that would happen...and I would have cried if I hadn't been crying in Metamorphosis moments ago. Ah, so you brought Kagura back and it doesn't seem like she's under Naraku's spell...just the way she should be...with her Fluffy...can't wait until the next update....whenever that will be!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 12:02 CDT
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Oh!Oh! What a fabulous chapter! I finally got time to read and catch up on some of my other reading! Great job! I'm so thrilled with this one! C
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