| "Vicissitude" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 03:06 CDT
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I'm liking where this is headed. Especially the part about InuYasha thinking about poor Shippo. Can't wait for the next update. ^_^
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 13:36 CDT
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this story is awesome! update soon. i'm hooked.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fan fic please update soon i can berly wate for the next one
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 15:55 CDT
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Incredible chapter! Really really well done! lol the image of yasha jumping to land on his limb and it not being there just killed me LMAO the whole chapter is really well done. Poor yashas ear getting burned by shippou I love having friends who are writers! this is really well written I can easily visualize everything as it happens in this chapter great stuff can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: July 31, 2005 12:47 CDT
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naraku found a way into the future? oh no. ohhhh...noo. ...i hope he gets hit by a bus. they killed Kaede? damn. allright, someone needs to die now and preferably naraku! damn him! great story the plot is really suspensefull! i can't wait to see what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 02:18 CDT
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Wow...you and Sueric have almost the same writing technique, but you're also a beta for her so maybe that's where I see the resemblence...just a quick question: Do you, unlike Sueric, like to write action? For her not liking to write it she sure does an awesome job at doing it; your action sence are awesome as well!! Damn that Naraku...could he have somehow gotten through the well by using the tree branch of Goshinboku? I could see why it would be logical, it's the only thing that remains the same in both times; but it also seems a little iffy that it would be able to do that...but then again, maybe not...they don't call it a God Tree for nothing, ne?
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Title: the difference between Denotation and Connotation (just for laughs XD)
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 02:03 CDT
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You really are trying to send us into shock with these quick updates! Or you're just really enjoying your story and it's working well for you XD Either way we all win here! I'm intrigued by your desecration of poor Goshinboku. That's a really smart idea that I don't think I've seen before. Congrats, you found a new and unique way to connect the dots ^_~ I can't wait to read more... what will Kagome and InuYasha find on the other side of the well? I hope her family is alright, the group really does need her to hold them together and she can't do that is she herself falls apart. Great chapter Sari!
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Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 01:40 CDT
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Awesome chapter, as always! I'm interested to see where this is heading. So far, so good, and once again, I'm impressed with your burgeoning skills as a storyteller! Keep it up; I know you will! Can't wait for the next chapter, too!
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Reviewed By: Inaqui On: July 24, 2005 01:15 CDT
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Very nicely done. Characterization is spot on. One thing I particularily liked is the way you described the idle actions during a conversation (something I've seen done either very badly, eg stilted and cliche or unbelievable, or not at all, so you have images of the conversing people standing staring into space with only mouths moving.). There were only a few grammatical errors so far as I could see, and mostly typos I'm sure. Yes, very nicely done. d(^^)b
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Reviewed By: Thepizzaiscold [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great story! You really have a talent in writing, i really enjoyed reading what was written so far. Okay, enough kissing ass. ja ne ^_^!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice start on what seems to be a great story. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mizbum2u(NLI) On: July 22, 2005 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is inu/kag right? its going really good right now though.. ^-^
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Reviewed By: dudekiller On: July 20, 2005 15:29 CDT
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you've peaked my intrest, please update soon
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Reviewed By: Akihanah On: July 19, 2005 23:22 CDT
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nice, I'm curious now. Very good with the spelling and grammar and spacing and stuff. Inuyasha really does seem to be thrilled about having Kagome alone on his back. Well, I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Amaro Scribe On: July 19, 2005 21:00 CDT
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Hey, just so you know, I think you may have accidentally italisized the entire chapter except for a few sentences at the beginning. Anyway, so far, so good! Definately building tension and anticipation--the well has never been focused on by anyone since Mistress Centipede or Yura...odd, when it is such a necessary piece of the whole thing. I like what you're doing so far--I'll be here for the whole ride :) so to speak.
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