| "The Shikon Kingdom" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 21, 2005 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 31, 2005 20:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon. i most know what happens.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome start to a fic. Update soon. Can't wait to read how Kurama and Kagome meet, how they get along with each other and what happens with the rest of the the gang.
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Reviewed By: Eppy-dono (Too lazy to login) On: June 19, 2005 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your spelling could use some work, but the idea is original and this could become a pretty good story if you improve on it. ^^ Good luck, this could prove interesting.
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