| "Grant Me Death" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: CrypticShadowWriter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea! It totally rocks! Apart from Naruto and Sakura having to be dead, I love everything else, especially Marieka and Yuri! The rest is just fine but the cliffie was totally mean! You can't just go and mention Gaara and then stop!! ;-; Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Cassidy Vance [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is good... are you trying to depicy marieka as a mix of naruto and sasuke? please update soon, there aren't a lot of action stories nowadays...
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