| "Fed Up but Not Lonely" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it! r u gonna update soon? i like all the heartbreak and things, lol. so will inu and kag get together in the end? update soon pls
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Title: Fed Up But Not Lonely
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a real good story and I like where it's going. But who will end up with Kagome.Sesshomaru or Inuyasha. I hope it's Sesshomaru. I hte Inuyasha and Kagome stories. I love Sesshomaru and Kagome stories more then anything. So I hope you update this story soon.
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Title: Fed Up But Not Lonely
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 00:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 09, 2005 23:40 CDT
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marvelous work! Just when I think there can't be antoher lame-ass story that starts with Kags spying on Inu and Kik, you prove me wrong, well done! This story is way overused. Kik and Inu would never have sex, they've only ever kissed once. Here's a thought; you wanna write Kouga-Kagome,that's fine. just have an original plot!
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this story so far, but the chaps are far too short -BUT i do understand why :-) Looking fwd to the next one.
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Reviewed By: sailormoon1996 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 01:12 CDT
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your story is really good...but you should introduce a new character...if you had kikyo sleep with all the guys in the story that a really worthy of her....i like your story. i would add new charater, but that just me.
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 19:00 CDT
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I'm enjoying your story. There are some spelling and grammar errors, but nothing major that takes away from the story. Do you have a beta-reader?
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Reviewed By: Silverwolf21-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I love the story it shows a whole other side of Kagome that most people barely see and it is really good it keeps peoples attention.
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 04:38 CDT
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nope i dont think its a slut and if it is O WELL U GOTTA DELL WITH IT! lol i love the story, along with how Inu chose Kikyo, but Kikyo is cheating like the bitch she is mwahaha~~ ok so update plz! And can u have Sesshomaru A.K.A. the Lord of the western lands Sexymaru(sesshomaru) have a good part in the story, maybe team up with Naraku or sumthing? Ick that mental image of Kikyo giving head 2 Sess..icky that was a BAD mental pic..ick,..ok love da fic keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Lots of twists & turns here, but i want to stick with it & see where it all leads.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, i like sluts...they're interesting people, anyways, i thought this was weird but cool. it's....different but i was entertained so good job. i'm interested into knowing what is going to happen next! i'm always open to new ideas and stuff so call me crazy but i liked this story.
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Reviewed By: hidoichibiahou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me just say this..... this story is like a slut.... no one likes them
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