| "Colonist Labour Camp no. 125" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 06:22 CST
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I really love it so far! This seems like it's turning into a Wufei/Duo fic. Am I right? Also, I was wondering; where is Heero? Is he in the Oz army? He seems like the type to want discipline the way the Ozzies have it, although no doubt a certain four men will change his mind. Also, the machines their forced to build, do you think you can work Duo and maybe Trowa into stealing a few parts, then managing to esxape the camp and build the gundams? Sorry if I'm making to many suggestions, but I couldn't resist! By the way, the glowing amethyst eye thing Dup has and his ability to resist mind-altering serum seems like...magic! Don't you think? ...I just officially went to far, didn't I? ^_^
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Title: Grim!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really dark, and you use detail really, really well. Excellent AU.
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Reviewed By: Bend and Snap On: September 18, 2005 19:06 CDT
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Come now, seven chapters and still no title? How about the name of the camp? It's better than nothing. Interesting story, but the time lag between updates makes it hard to remember what went on before. Can I urge you to speed up the process?
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Reviewed By: the shell On: August 24, 2005 21:01 CDT
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Once again, i love this fanfic. You wanted some suggestions, I think, so here are some of the things i was thinking about. Where is Heero? Is he a part of Oz, or a prisoner, or someone that is still free? If Heero was the general (which i doubt), it would be really interesting for Heero to first meet Duo trying to steal back everyone's names. I'd really like to see some more Quatre/Trowa interaction. Esp. more of Quatre's thoughts/feelings concerning Trowa. But as always, Wufie and his (potential) relationship with the Colonel is my main request. I just love these two! I like the fact Wufie can't be broken by Oz officers. And Merquise is kinda like a radical, b/c he doesn't act like the rest of the Oz officers. They would be perrrfect together. You might be able to tell, but i really have more of an interest in secondary characters relationships (3x4, 5xMerquise) more than the main pairing(1x2 I assume). I'm like this with everything I read. Anyway, please keep posting! I really enjoy reading this fic!
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Title: Huzzah!
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: August 16, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this fic a great deal and i think youre writting very well...when you write longer chapters ill write longer reviews! ^_~` lol only kidding. Keep it up i cant wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::sniffles:: i hope the prisoner doesn't get hurt...i have another chap left to read and i'll review again. this is really good!
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Reviewed By: Krissy220 On: July 21, 2005 17:14 CDT
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Man I can't wait for you to update this one. This is such an orginal alternate universe, one that I haven't read before. You wrote it that I have interest in the littlest unknown character. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: the shell On: July 18, 2005 01:00 CDT
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I totally LOVE this fanfic. I can't wait to read the next part! I'm totally looking forward to Heero's entrance and Wufie's relationship (if there is gonna be one) with the oz officer. ^_^ please write more soon!! Your fanfic is def on my fav list. R
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Title: I'm a very happy camper
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 07:45 CDT
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GRINS* I like your portrayal of Duo but you got the numbers mixed slightly, when 05 is telling 04 that he'll glare him into next week you have 03 written instead of 04, it's not hard to figure out what you meant but I thought I'd let you know anyhow. I like the idea of Duo stealing their names back but when does Heero come in and is Duo, Duo's real name or is it the one he gave himself... what I mean,is what's his past exactly, or all of them... mind you if the other three get the rest of their memories back with their names we'll find some of that out soon enough, I'm really looking forward to the next part! Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 22:18 CDT
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Actually, Une is eleven... Continue
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Title: Let me think...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 16:14 CDT
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Um... Treize is a colonel? That's different,... Let me guess... noventa is the Dictator?
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Ricky Rick On: July 04, 2005 08:46 CDT
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Interesting. Keep on writing, babe! ^^
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Title: More please?
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 06:49 CDT
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Eep, poor 47 (Hilde). I was hoping that someone might intervene... at least Wufei was okay. But why did Sally get to leave? Glad it worked!!!
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Title: Ok, thanks
Reviewed By: Sandy (Sandileina) On: July 03, 2005 04:54 CDT
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Great, thankyou. I tried on my brother's computer, and it works. ^^ Thanks for the tip. Ok, back to writing the fourth chapter... I really should be doing hwk... But this is way more fun! And besides, you and thewarriorkai asked very nicely and made me feel heppy. ^____^
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Title: sometimes
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 04:38 CDT
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mediaminer sometimes does that to me too but I've found that you have to make sure you're logged in to get reviews and sometimes it's the computer that is the actual problem, the comp at work won't let me see past the seventh review so I have to use another computer to see the rest. As to viewing your third chapter, I can't tell you what's up with that... sorry, I hope this helps though. You can contact the people in charge, I think... I don't know, I'm pretty knew myself... sorry I wasn't much help.
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