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Title: ? 0_o ?
Reviewed By: dishgurl On: November 29, 2005 19:13 PST
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I gotta be honest with you... when I was reading the new chapter... I got confused while reading the part from Vegita's POV about Ahradmar. That part of the story got confusing so I skipped ahead... don't hate me, but I really got lost. I understand since I read the other two stories, but I just got lost when reading this one. sorry. On the other hand I did enjoy that you put Raditz in your story... ^_^ I love stories with Raditz too. ^_^ Who was his mate prior I wonder... If you make any more stories after you finish this one could you make one about Raditz and his life prior to his death by the hands of the Namek?
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: November 29, 2005 18:09 PST
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Well that was very informative thank you, it nice Vegeta can open up but dose he have to always do things the hard way? Grate chapter Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: November 28, 2005 19:43 PST
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I have read both To Hell Together and Come Together (loved them, by the way) and I am pleased that some things are being explained. Discussing previous partners can be soo awkward for a couple, so I'm glad you included that bit (it could also be funny as hell). I hope we get to see more of Vegeta's past, that's always nice to read. As always, I'm looking forward to the next update.
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Title: WHOOO!
Reviewed By: dishgirl On: November 17, 2005 18:10 PST
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YAY! This wonderful story continues!... ^_^ YAY!... I am glad... i had hoped that that wasn't the end. I just got thru reading the two prequels to this sory an i LOVED both of them too!... OH MY GOSH! BOIY DID I LOVE THEM!... ^_^ I think you have a unique and wonderful writing style. I can almost visualize them all together. I am gald your stories are well detailed. I can't stand authors who put alot of thought into a begining of a story and either don't have the same details thruought their stories... or just NEVER update... I LOVE your stories and i'm gald that there are more chapters to come ^_^ Signed Dish ^_~
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: November 13, 2005 15:09 PST
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Heh, I like weird. I enjoyed every second of Goku and Vegeta's 'moment' in the kitchen. And reading about the Gohan incident from Krillin's perspective was hilarious. I also liked all those new little tidbits from Tien, it seems he knew even before Goku did. Anything with Bulma's mom is always a hoot. Anyway, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: November 13, 2005 09:18 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta no sweets...ya like they can stop him LoL Cool chapter LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: dishgurl On: November 06, 2005 15:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have gotta say that i was confused... i saw that your story sayed completed, but your sory itself seems to be 1/4th done...
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: October 02, 2005 14:09 PDT
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Great chapter! I love how there isn't a single character that is simply one-dimensional, they are all realistically complex. I enjoyed the insight into Bulma's conflicting emotions, and once again I am eagerly looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: October 01, 2005 13:28 PDT
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Sayain Loven' cool Update soon
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: NewFan On: August 29, 2005 15:16 PDT
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Yay, an update! I really enjoy your writing style, so as long as you write something, I'll read it, and reread it, and re-reread it, etc, to pass the time until the next update, which will hopefully be soon. Anyway, amazing stories, keep it up!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: NewFan On: August 26, 2005 14:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just come across your stories and they are all great! I have been reading them obsessively over the last few days. Please please please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 16, 2005 06:18 PDT
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cool, well now that both women know it the kids turn...nope I do not envey him trying to convince them...have fun Vegeta lol update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 10, 2005 18:26 PDT
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Nice chapter, this is going to be Very intresting Talk soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 04, 2005 07:58 PDT
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HI, wow it is gettting beeter and better. Poor Vegeta, not his night, hope he settles down , an dthat medicine don't hurt the baby...I love how you had her react to the prenacey when Goku told her after he left lol See ya LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 29, 2005 16:31 PDT
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YOU GOT IT STARTED!!!!!!!!!!! Wow grate start Please up date soon Bye LadyKATT
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