| "War Diaries: Adventures Zero-Three" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: takatorika4ever On: June 06, 2003 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bravo it is an honour to read such a great story not only by itself but in conjuction with rdd you have a real talent that could carry you in my humble opinon much farther then ff.net or mm.org but thats just me talking.
adios |
Reviewed By: Rocker Starlight On: July 01, 2003 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. It's good to see another chapter finally, since work has had to eat up so much of your spare time. ^_^ I hope things ease up enough that you don't burn yourself out though. Laters! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: March 02, 2003 15:42 EST
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait to see the next one. |
Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu On: January 07, 2003 11:04 EST
Comment/Review:
You're doing a great job Archive. It's about time, too. I wonder how the picnic will turn out. I take it that Mrs. Wataru is really another Chichi. Or rather, was. Okay, is Wataru gaining some sort of psychic ability because of that Chaos Fire attack? |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 08:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. It's a pity conisdering al that Ken must have gone through during D^3, he still doesn't have access to JewelBeemon. What does it take?
BTW, mentioning D^3 gives me a pretty good idea of who Eris is. |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 19, 2003 16:55 EDT
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Good chapter, but am I the only one that sees something wrong with this scenario? A fairly powerful squad of Angel digimon is tasked with guarding a gem. Being holy digimon, their powers are quite arguably strong against evil digimon. They've had at least some warning before being attacked by 8 dark evolved perfection level digimon but whom they still out number. Yet despite this they basically stand there and get tortured and massacred. All of two Pidmon seem to actually be able to fight back, and they get killed before they're able to do more than scorch a few feather's. I would think that at the very least Lady Devimon, or Skull Greymon would get caught in a cross fire of attacks and devolved. Or at the very least actually get attacked. All told the battle could have been a lot more realistic while still being a massacre. |
Reviewed By: Tri-Stater On: December 25, 2002 17:48 EST
Comment/Review:
Great Story! Now, moving a bit off-topic, a have a new thread I'd like you to look at on the board. Hope I'm not bugging you. |
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