| "War Diaries: Adventures Zero-Three" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 22:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
After Daisuke learned of Hikari sleeping with Takeru his depression caused him to lose the use of his digimentals for a while. In order to regain their ability to armor evolve V-mon, he needed only to demonstrate the trait they are associated with.
Daisuke has more than demonstrated his courage by approaching girls for sexual pleasure.
Daisuke has also demonstrated friendship by defending Takeru against the guys teasing him about being married.
So, yes, Daisuke had lost the ability to use his digimentals, but has also regained their use. |
Reviewed By: Krocket [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Iori finally did one of the major mistakes in War Diaries... Never force your partner to evolve. BTW how did Daisuke in Diaries 17 evolve V-Mon to Fladramon? I thought his Digimentals wouldn't work.
Kyle Evanick. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 19, 2003 20:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ack! ok I feel stupid... I just reread the fic and see he did Dark Evolve him into Scorpiomon....
I wonder what Crest Iori's going to gain? Honor?
And whats this...ANOTHER SERIES?! Damn, Lord Archive-sempai...you are one hell of an author to take down this many projects at once...
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 19, 2003 20:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
*nods* Much better. And Chaos? Iori forcing his partener to evolve is what just happened. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 19, 2003 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something tells me Iori is dangerously close to forcing his partner to evolve...
Wonder what Crests Iori and the 3rd group will gain... |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 17:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
(Smacks head on desk.) Oopsie. Forgot to include some description of the angels actually fighting back.... |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 18, 2003 17:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
"Now was that ability lost? If not, could Ken stop the Dark Seed Chosen from being able to Evolve their Partners?"
Think of it this way, it's kind of like all the other abilities Ken had as the Kaiser. In theory he still has access to them. In practice it takes a huge toll on him mentally to try. And the evolution block was for regular evolution. It didn't work against armor evolution, and probably wouldn't work against a dark evolution. |
Reviewed By: TiggsPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 07:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
One things that really sets the War/RD Diaries apart form any other 'fic I've come across before is that it sets up the use of an enemy group of Chosen. This raises an interesting line of speculation that was enver raised (and never needed) in the Anime.
Now, in early 02 episodes (in the original, not just the dub) it states clearly that Ken's Dark Digivice was hampering Evolution. (albeit aided greatly by the Dark Towers)
Now was that ability lost? If not, could Ken stop the Dark Seed Chosen from being able to Evolve their Partners?
Just an idle bit of speculation. |
Reviewed By: Goshachan On: July 12, 2003 14:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, if you want to a see a series about Michael's team, I'm currently working on one right now that involves their first exploits in the other world, how they got their Dejimon, and how they met Mimi. I might get it up, we'll see. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 11, 2003 19:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
I would like to see Eric from the Dark Diaries make more apperance in this fic. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 07, 2003 02:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
All of those objects have to do with the World of Dreams that the Digimon02 that did not happen. Since some,Takaoto,etc of the Tamers did watch Digimon02,they would know about the World Of Dreams and could warn them but since that will never happen,it is a moot point anyway. They are using the sword to channel dark engeries from the Dark Ocean though the World Of Dreams and the painting allows Dark Seed Children to go to the Digital World,Tamers's world,Chosen Childrens's Digital World,Dark World,Tamers's Digital World,etc though the World Of Dreams. It would be cool,if the Dark Seed Children enter the Tamers's world and how will they fare againest the Tamers and their digimons? I have o idea how the Dream Catcher will be used by the Dark Seed Children. Please write chapter 19 of this very quickly! Please Lord Archive,answer this review. |
Reviewed By: Imerak On: July 05, 2003 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! I really like how you handle the international Digidestined. Speaking off which, did anyone write that fic about the New York group? |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 05, 2003 00:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting, the Dark Seed Children have obtained the ability to reach Perfection. For some reason that scene brings to mind the thought of how the DS Children would react to facing a threat from the .hack games. Mainly because they wouldn't really stand much of a chance against something like one of the Phases, or Cubia but that wouldn't keep them from trying.
On the special powers thing, I always dislike it when people wonder if it makes them not human. In the greater part of fiction, mages and telepaths, while often feared or shunned for their abilities, are rarely considered to be non-human. So after reading a lot of different stuff, the point of view that special powers just means different talents, not a change in race has sort of rubbed off on me.
On a side note, you seem to be on a role of wrecking musemums and accompanying artifacts in this series. |
Reviewed By: Kaiser Sephiroth On: July 03, 2003 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but why is Eyes on Tomorrow missing from here? |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 02, 2003 01:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. A couple things though. First: "She could kill the metal digimon, but for some reason had no desire to do so. She just wanted to stop her."
You make it sound like that it's some odd exception this time that she doesn't feel like killing. However I see no reason why a digimon decent enough to associate with a CC digimon would feel the need to kill unncessarilty. So making it sound like this time is the exception is kind of odd.
Second: ""Too bad you we're there, Iori! Those Dark Seed kids didn't stand a chance!" " Shouldn't that be "Weren't there" ?
Third, kudos to Mrs. Wataru for not roling over excepting the situation without question just because "it's fate". By being reluctant to let her daughter get caught up as a CC, she's actually being a good parent.
Fourth: I'm going to guess that the Dark Seed CC's objective is the dimension of dreams from the last few episodes of 02. Without Black Wargreymon sealing the gate, the way to that reality wasn't opened. Given that little things like Vamdemon getting his body back are possible there, I'd imagine the infected CC going there would be a bad thing. |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
