| "War Diaries: Adventures Zero-Three" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: TiggsPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 07:59 EDT
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One things that really sets the War/RD Diaries apart form any other 'fic I've come across before is that it sets up the use of an enemy group of Chosen. This raises an interesting line of speculation that was enver raised (and never needed) in the Anime.
Now, in early 02 episodes (in the original, not just the dub) it states clearly that Ken's Dark Digivice was hampering Evolution. (albeit aided greatly by the Dark Towers)
Now was that ability lost? If not, could Ken stop the Dark Seed Chosen from being able to Evolve their Partners?
Just an idle bit of speculation. |
Reviewed By: Goshachan On: July 12, 2003 14:46 EDT
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Hey, if you want to a see a series about Michael's team, I'm currently working on one right now that involves their first exploits in the other world, how they got their Dejimon, and how they met Mimi. I might get it up, we'll see. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 11, 2003 19:04 EDT
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I would like to see Eric from the Dark Diaries make more apperance in this fic. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 07, 2003 02:13 EDT
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All of those objects have to do with the World of Dreams that the Digimon02 that did not happen. Since some,Takaoto,etc of the Tamers did watch Digimon02,they would know about the World Of Dreams and could warn them but since that will never happen,it is a moot point anyway. They are using the sword to channel dark engeries from the Dark Ocean though the World Of Dreams and the painting allows Dark Seed Children to go to the Digital World,Tamers's world,Chosen Childrens's Digital World,Dark World,Tamers's Digital World,etc though the World Of Dreams. It would be cool,if the Dark Seed Children enter the Tamers's world and how will they fare againest the Tamers and their digimons? I have o idea how the Dream Catcher will be used by the Dark Seed Children. Please write chapter 19 of this very quickly! Please Lord Archive,answer this review. |
Reviewed By: Imerak On: July 05, 2003 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! I really like how you handle the international Digidestined. Speaking off which, did anyone write that fic about the New York group? |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 05, 2003 00:55 EDT
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Interesting, the Dark Seed Children have obtained the ability to reach Perfection. For some reason that scene brings to mind the thought of how the DS Children would react to facing a threat from the .hack games. Mainly because they wouldn't really stand much of a chance against something like one of the Phases, or Cubia but that wouldn't keep them from trying.
On the special powers thing, I always dislike it when people wonder if it makes them not human. In the greater part of fiction, mages and telepaths, while often feared or shunned for their abilities, are rarely considered to be non-human. So after reading a lot of different stuff, the point of view that special powers just means different talents, not a change in race has sort of rubbed off on me.
On a side note, you seem to be on a role of wrecking musemums and accompanying artifacts in this series. |
Reviewed By: Kaiser Sephiroth On: July 03, 2003 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but why is Eyes on Tomorrow missing from here? |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 02, 2003 01:03 EDT
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Good chapter. A couple things though. First: "She could kill the metal digimon, but for some reason had no desire to do so. She just wanted to stop her."
You make it sound like that it's some odd exception this time that she doesn't feel like killing. However I see no reason why a digimon decent enough to associate with a CC digimon would feel the need to kill unncessarilty. So making it sound like this time is the exception is kind of odd.
Second: ""Too bad you we're there, Iori! Those Dark Seed kids didn't stand a chance!" " Shouldn't that be "Weren't there" ?
Third, kudos to Mrs. Wataru for not roling over excepting the situation without question just because "it's fate". By being reluctant to let her daughter get caught up as a CC, she's actually being a good parent.
Fourth: I'm going to guess that the Dark Seed CC's objective is the dimension of dreams from the last few episodes of 02. Without Black Wargreymon sealing the gate, the way to that reality wasn't opened. Given that little things like Vamdemon getting his body back are possible there, I'd imagine the infected CC going there would be a bad thing. |
Reviewed By: takatorika4ever On: June 06, 2003 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bravo it is an honour to read such a great story not only by itself but in conjuction with rdd you have a real talent that could carry you in my humble opinon much farther then ff.net or mm.org but thats just me talking.
adios |
Reviewed By: Rocker Starlight On: July 01, 2003 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. It's good to see another chapter finally, since work has had to eat up so much of your spare time. ^_^ I hope things ease up enough that you don't burn yourself out though. Laters! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: March 02, 2003 15:42 EST
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I enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait to see the next one. |
Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu On: January 07, 2003 11:04 EST
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You're doing a great job Archive. It's about time, too. I wonder how the picnic will turn out. I take it that Mrs. Wataru is really another Chichi. Or rather, was. Okay, is Wataru gaining some sort of psychic ability because of that Chaos Fire attack? |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 08:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. It's a pity conisdering al that Ken must have gone through during D^3, he still doesn't have access to JewelBeemon. What does it take?
BTW, mentioning D^3 gives me a pretty good idea of who Eris is. |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 19, 2003 16:55 EDT
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Good chapter, but am I the only one that sees something wrong with this scenario? A fairly powerful squad of Angel digimon is tasked with guarding a gem. Being holy digimon, their powers are quite arguably strong against evil digimon. They've had at least some warning before being attacked by 8 dark evolved perfection level digimon but whom they still out number. Yet despite this they basically stand there and get tortured and massacred. All of two Pidmon seem to actually be able to fight back, and they get killed before they're able to do more than scorch a few feather's. I would think that at the very least Lady Devimon, or Skull Greymon would get caught in a cross fire of attacks and devolved. Or at the very least actually get attacked. All told the battle could have been a lot more realistic while still being a massacre. |
Reviewed By: Tri-Stater On: December 25, 2002 17:48 EST
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Great Story! Now, moving a bit off-topic, a have a new thread I'd like you to look at on the board. Hope I'm not bugging you. |
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