| "War Diaries: Adventures Zero-Three" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Adran06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2012 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't say enough just how awesome your Diaries universe is. I hate that it seems to be mostly dead, and updates for any of the Diaries stories are sporatic and slow at best. Every time I see an update, I always drop whatever other story I'm reading just to go read the new Diaries chapter. I REALLY hope you plan to update this SOONER rather than later. This is a HORRIBLE cliff hanger to have to wait a year for! Will Yume live? What's happening as a result of the poison? Will the Chosen finally have an actual WIN rather than yet another loss in the continuing battle against the Dark Seed Chosen? I can't wait for the answers to even ONE of these questions! And that doesn't even address the stuff related to RDD or the D-Arc series. Keep up the great work and update soon! TTYL, Adran |
Title: Dii
Reviewed By: ForceMetal On: February 01, 2008 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lord Archive, I've been a fan of your work for years now, though I mostly only stuck to Red Digivice. Only just a few days ago I thought to look you up again and started reading your other digimon related work. I've completed Red Digivice, War Diaries, Red D-Arc, The Shuffle, London Diaries, and now both your Diaries Movies. I really hope to see another update to War or Red Digivice again someday soon, but will continue re-reading your work time and again in-between now and then. So Goodluck with it!
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Title: ^___^
Reviewed By: Saiyoto Kitto On: January 09, 2005 14:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally know how to submit reviews in mm.org n__n'. I just want to tell you that I love your fics ^o^(weeell, I've only read the non-lemon ones I'm not a well-knower of that area yet ^__^''), I'm happy that you updated this and The Shuffle. I hope that you continue your great work soon n_n. p.d: Did you see the trailer of the new season of digimon x evolution? I know that I'm going to hate that season as much that I hate the power rangers *___*
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Title: Yaaaaaaaaa, NEW CHAPTERR!!!!!!!^_^
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I love this stuff! The Diaries are the very first stories I read on MM and they kick ass of coarse. If I ever get my ideas right one day maybe I'll get in the Diaries universe. Yours truly, the future ruler of the Diaries Universe.(Insert evil laugh here.)
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Reviewed By: FruitloopTrooper On: July 27, 2004 16:24 EDT
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Excellent, as always. The Dark Seed children are quickly becomming the arch-enemies that the Chosen Children never had. I can see Noriko letting all that power go to her head. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Stratagemini [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an interesting entry, although it was not as interesting as some of the other entries that I've seen you write. One of the things that you did which I liked, were the actions of Ogremon at the end of the battle helped to convey a sense that the characters have real lives, and things that they value more than defeating the enemy. This new ability of Daisuke's to evolve V-Mon at a distance, is very interesting, and could have a number of potential uses, even if it is only to armour level. All in all, I enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for writing it.
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Reviewed By: Custommagnum [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 21:39 EDT
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All I can say is that this was well worth the wait. I can't wait for the next chapter in any of your digimon works.
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Reviewed By: Custommagnum [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 21:38 EDT
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Well, I don't know what to say. I've been waiting for an update on this for a while and All I can say is that I enjoyed it. Can't wait for an update on the next chapter of this and Neo Digimon.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: ACE117RA [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Story. I am enjoying it alot. Please update and keep up the good work.
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Title: Happy day
Reviewed By: metaletemon27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last, an update. I was beginning to think you were dead. But I'd wait ten years for another chapter, Archive, you're that good. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: FruitloopTrooper On: April 28, 2004 09:51 EDT
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Unpaid overtime, huh? I just hope you don't have to work ten to twelve hours days like I do. Anyway, great story, as always. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Dark requiem On: October 19, 2003 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What`s up lord? I want to tell you that I`ve begun to read this and your other fanfics just three weeks ago and I think they`re great, especially the red digivice diaries and this one. Anyone can see that you have put a lot of effort in those two, which turns them into your best works so far and also in some of the best fanfics in mediaminer. Well, there`s nothing left to say except bye for now, and PLEASE update soon¡¡¡
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 22, 2003 03:10 EDT
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Here is my question for you ,Lord Archive and please try to answer this question,why don't the digimon foes of the Chosen Children ally themselves with
the Dark seed Children? Of course they would back stab,betry,etc each other later on but togather they are stronger if they work togather.
Here is my question for the D-Arc,why don't you let Ai,Mako and Susy with their digimons take more active role in the Tamers Diaries? |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 00:32 EDT
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All are welcomed at the Diaries Universe Message Board
http://pub62.ezboard.com/bthediariesuniverse
There is a forum that is password protected for authors only, Author's Corner. All other are free for anyone to visit.
Reason why other teams don't do something is A) they have their own concerns to worry about, and B) the Dark Seed children are out of reach by the Odaiba group most of the time, let alone other teams. |
Reviewed By: Lord Leviathan On: July 22, 2003 00:02 EDT
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I was always a being big fan of your.Least now because my passion for digimon is almost gone and the sex get tiring after while(I prefer the action).I just don't how can you write so many fics in the same time.also can we visited your messageboard even if we are not authors?
you also doing a fic about dark seed children.I was wanting for one about dark chosen.I hope you can manage of this fics.
fic question: why not all the chosen ones around the world decide to attack the dark seed children or it's because they hiding in the dark world? Also are they more dark seed children or dark chosen?
by the way, I used to call myself Snake Lord of Chaos.I used to go to megchan messageboard. |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 22:21 EDT
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After Daisuke learned of Hikari sleeping with Takeru his depression caused him to lose the use of his digimentals for a while. In order to regain their ability to armor evolve V-mon, he needed only to demonstrate the trait they are associated with.
Daisuke has more than demonstrated his courage by approaching girls for sexual pleasure.
Daisuke has also demonstrated friendship by defending Takeru against the guys teasing him about being married.
So, yes, Daisuke had lost the ability to use his digimentals, but has also regained their use. |
Reviewed By: Krocket [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Iori finally did one of the major mistakes in War Diaries... Never force your partner to evolve. BTW how did Daisuke in Diaries 17 evolve V-Mon to Fladramon? I thought his Digimentals wouldn't work.
Kyle Evanick. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 19, 2003 20:41 EDT
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Ack! ok I feel stupid... I just reread the fic and see he did Dark Evolve him into Scorpiomon....
I wonder what Crest Iori's going to gain? Honor?
And whats this...ANOTHER SERIES?! Damn, Lord Archive-sempai...you are one hell of an author to take down this many projects at once...
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 19, 2003 20:41 EDT
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*nods* Much better. And Chaos? Iori forcing his partener to evolve is what just happened. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 19, 2003 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something tells me Iori is dangerously close to forcing his partner to evolve...
Wonder what Crests Iori and the 3rd group will gain... |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 17:40 EDT
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(Smacks head on desk.) Oopsie. Forgot to include some description of the angels actually fighting back.... |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 18, 2003 17:24 EDT
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"Now was that ability lost? If not, could Ken stop the Dark Seed Chosen from being able to Evolve their Partners?"
Think of it this way, it's kind of like all the other abilities Ken had as the Kaiser. In theory he still has access to them. In practice it takes a huge toll on him mentally to try. And the evolution block was for regular evolution. It didn't work against armor evolution, and probably wouldn't work against a dark evolution. |
Reviewed By: TiggsPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 07:59 EDT
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One things that really sets the War/RD Diaries apart form any other 'fic I've come across before is that it sets up the use of an enemy group of Chosen. This raises an interesting line of speculation that was enver raised (and never needed) in the Anime.
Now, in early 02 episodes (in the original, not just the dub) it states clearly that Ken's Dark Digivice was hampering Evolution. (albeit aided greatly by the Dark Towers)
Now was that ability lost? If not, could Ken stop the Dark Seed Chosen from being able to Evolve their Partners?
Just an idle bit of speculation. |
Reviewed By: Goshachan On: July 12, 2003 14:46 EDT
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Hey, if you want to a see a series about Michael's team, I'm currently working on one right now that involves their first exploits in the other world, how they got their Dejimon, and how they met Mimi. I might get it up, we'll see. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 11, 2003 19:04 EDT
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I would like to see Eric from the Dark Diaries make more apperance in this fic. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 07, 2003 02:13 EDT
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All of those objects have to do with the World of Dreams that the Digimon02 that did not happen. Since some,Takaoto,etc of the Tamers did watch Digimon02,they would know about the World Of Dreams and could warn them but since that will never happen,it is a moot point anyway. They are using the sword to channel dark engeries from the Dark Ocean though the World Of Dreams and the painting allows Dark Seed Children to go to the Digital World,Tamers's world,Chosen Childrens's Digital World,Dark World,Tamers's Digital World,etc though the World Of Dreams. It would be cool,if the Dark Seed Children enter the Tamers's world and how will they fare againest the Tamers and their digimons? I have o idea how the Dream Catcher will be used by the Dark Seed Children. Please write chapter 19 of this very quickly! Please Lord Archive,answer this review. |
Reviewed By: Imerak On: July 05, 2003 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! I really like how you handle the international Digidestined. Speaking off which, did anyone write that fic about the New York group? |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 05, 2003 00:55 EDT
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Interesting, the Dark Seed Children have obtained the ability to reach Perfection. For some reason that scene brings to mind the thought of how the DS Children would react to facing a threat from the .hack games. Mainly because they wouldn't really stand much of a chance against something like one of the Phases, or Cubia but that wouldn't keep them from trying.
On the special powers thing, I always dislike it when people wonder if it makes them not human. In the greater part of fiction, mages and telepaths, while often feared or shunned for their abilities, are rarely considered to be non-human. So after reading a lot of different stuff, the point of view that special powers just means different talents, not a change in race has sort of rubbed off on me.
On a side note, you seem to be on a role of wrecking musemums and accompanying artifacts in this series. |
Reviewed By: Kaiser Sephiroth On: July 03, 2003 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but why is Eyes on Tomorrow missing from here? |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 02, 2003 01:03 EDT
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Good chapter. A couple things though. First: "She could kill the metal digimon, but for some reason had no desire to do so. She just wanted to stop her."
You make it sound like that it's some odd exception this time that she doesn't feel like killing. However I see no reason why a digimon decent enough to associate with a CC digimon would feel the need to kill unncessarilty. So making it sound like this time is the exception is kind of odd.
Second: ""Too bad you we're there, Iori! Those Dark Seed kids didn't stand a chance!" " Shouldn't that be "Weren't there" ?
Third, kudos to Mrs. Wataru for not roling over excepting the situation without question just because "it's fate". By being reluctant to let her daughter get caught up as a CC, she's actually being a good parent.
Fourth: I'm going to guess that the Dark Seed CC's objective is the dimension of dreams from the last few episodes of 02. Without Black Wargreymon sealing the gate, the way to that reality wasn't opened. Given that little things like Vamdemon getting his body back are possible there, I'd imagine the infected CC going there would be a bad thing. |
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