| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 04:50 PDT
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*eyes swirl* I ... need to go study physics! Woman, stop making me feel under prepared every time I read your fics! *grumbles as she opens 'Physics for Idiots'* --- And Nice One with Kagome's dad. *grin* Any loving dad's reaction... only, Kagome's dad 'abandoned' her in theory, so Inuyasha can play the 'At least I never left!' card. Oooooh boy. I think for the next one, I'm revising my biology and the effects of testosterone on male brains, apart from my physics so I can keep up with what happened to Souta...
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 03:43 PDT
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I was THRILLED to see you updated this, it made my day!!! (which really, really needed making, let me tell you internetz...) Of course, I have to re-read it like, a million times because it's all scientific and I'm kind of slow today... but it was TOTALLY worth the wait to see InuYasha meet Kagome's dad...
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 21:02 PDT
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Youkai magick and physics pain/ screaming in multidimensional brane/ dark threads knitted in a daze/ into a scarf of multicolored pathways/ jewels and stones and winds go boom!/ is there any, any room/ for my sonic screwdriver?//Pax vobiscum.////----an unexpected and action packed chapter, my dear. I love all the physics and magicks together. Reminds me of stuff Fritz Leiber of fond memory might have pulled.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 19:20 PDT
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Yay!!! I was just thinking earlier today that it was a shame that it would be rude to give you a nudge and *Poof* here is an update. I should grumble at you in my brain more often if you're gonna eavesdrop. Very cool chapter. How often do you get to read something that mixes esoteric physics with esoteric mysticism with dudes with dog ears? Loved the end of it too. Hee!
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Reviewed By: Independent.C. On: May 08, 2008 14:19 PDT
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WHY must you write the names of the chapters in latin!!!!NO ONE understands it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Big cliffy!!! I'm enjoying this tremendously!!! Your alternate verse stories are a riot! The latin titles are a nice touch. I do believe Sessh has met his match (in Kirara), even though he's the baka no taisho.......uhm, sorry........inu no taisho (I love that!). Inu and Kags chemistry is flawless. You've set up a very complex plot but you're balancing it beautifully!!! Onward with the next chappie, Ipoe, your fan base patiently awaits!
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Reviewed By: Emilee On: March 18, 2008 13:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story recently and I am blown away. It is the best fanfic i've read ever in all my fandoms. Wow! Now that I've finally finished what's been written (it took me 3 days almost nonstop) all I can say is that I hope it won't be too long until the next update. Keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 12:54 PDT
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Went back to chapter 67 for a refresher and realized I must have missed it completely. The Sota/Kohaku & Buyo/Mao stuff was a really interesting surprise. Absolutely loved Inu's belated revelation about his brother's sense of humor. Oh hell, the whole thing was great, but those were my favs. I really feel for Kagome through all this, a human having to learn all those inu customs on the fly and feeling left out of their little growly conversations would piss me right the hell off too. I keep waiting to see if she's going to flip and submit her fist down one of their throats.
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Title: Chapt 26, revised
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 15:02 PDT
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How interesting! I just read this yesterday before you posted the revisions...First time I caught one with the previous so fresh. Writing from a Buddhist slant like I do, too, I like how you use dukkha and tahna. I like how Kaede and Kikyou sound better today than yesterday, I believe, and Kagome's hardheadedness that makes her such a magnificent bitch....good, good.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 10:37 PST
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As always another excellent chapter. I really love the interplay between Sesshomaru and Kirara. I don't suppose we will find out any time soon who the "scentless freak" is working for? I'm thinking it has to be a Naraku thing. Or could it possibly be someone else. Oh well I guess I will have to wait until the next chapter!! :)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 11:58 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter just as I expected it to be. You are very good to keep track of all the little subplots you have running around and not lose the story. I loved that Sesshomaru is showing some humor in dealing with Kirara, but as my name suggests I think that Kirara should win the battle between the two. I thought it was so funny that Inuyasha understood what was happening between those two and had such trouble to keep from laughing while others around were clueless to the interchange. It makes you wonder how clueless Inuyasha really was sometimes. It should be interesting how Kagome handles Inuyasha's inability to go through the well and also what happened in her time and the possible loss of Souta in the time distortion, especially since he is also Kohaku. I am looking forward to the next update when it appears.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 21:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now don't that just beat to shit and back, Inu cant get through! Still loved the interactions between Sess and Kirara tho, that was cute. Till next install, update when ya can! :)
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Reviewed By: Asyla the Ctarl Ctarl On: February 16, 2008 19:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving your story. It's wonderful. PLEASE WRITE MORE. I personal like Sesshomaru and Kirara's relationship. It's very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 19:29 PST
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With poetic license, spinning web and weaving thread,/ like Nona, you draw the story's fiber fine/ As Decima, each character's tale of life is read/ Will Morta, catlike, rub her claws against the line/ sealing their fate?//And people think I write complex stories.....good work! great chapter!
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Reviewed By: chienne de reine On: February 02, 2008 03:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Really I am so blown away by your story. Who knew that it was possible to include quarks in a story based around a doy-eared boy an a teenaged girl? I have to admit I read up all of the chapters in two sittings. I never studied latin, but I find myself trying to disect the chapter title before I begin reading it. (Based on the little that can be derived from the English words with latin roots)You have made developed an interesting dynamic between the charaters. I truely have enjoyed it so far. Just a little "What if...?". But if Miroku used the Wind Tunnel on Kanna would both the voids be negated? I mean two nothings can not exist in the same place. Anyways, I can't wait until next chapter.
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