| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: A thouroughly enjoyable read...
Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not often find myself reviewing for stories I read, due to my very busy schedule and figuring out what to really say etc... however, I would just like to say that I began this story at around 7pm yesterday and I have yet to sleep because I could not stop reading. lol. Seriously. My pupils are like needle points.:) Well done, though I must admit a bit of a shock with the Kirara and Sesshomarou pairing, as I happen to be an adamant fan of Rin, Sess pairings. (Rin being older of course!)In any case after I sucked it up, I didn't find the pairing to be nearly as odd as originally thought (Just so you know, I don't really read fanfics with any other Sess pairings, I'm biased, I know :) :)so extra Kudos to you!) In any case I eagerly await your next chapter or any Insight you might want to give on your writing technique, inspiration, etc as I have a degree in English Writing myself and have been contemplating writin a fan fic... Yours, Zetta
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 05:58 PST
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Wow...things are just beginning to be sorted out it seems, and it's already a lot to keep straight in my head! I wonder where all Souta has been and where he'll end up going before everything is resolved--and I thought Kagome had it rough! Her revelations about life and death were beautifully written, by the way. Thanks for another excellent chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 04:20 PST
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This was worth the wait. The character interactions continue to be a high point. Kirara has everything well in paw, doesn't she? Mao/Buyo is wonderful, I hope however the timelines sort themselves out she gets to continue to exist.
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Reviewed By: Sark On: December 17, 2007 03:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was completed when i started it...im all sad now cause i have to wait for you to update :'(. oh well awesome fic btw keep it up
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 05:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have delivered yet another beautifully written chapter. I understand why Kohaku was not revived, but I had hoped for a happier end for Runt. It is part of life and as such I understand it. Your amazing writing has pulled me in even further!! It has been such a long time since I have enjoyed a story such as this. I truly enjoy your story and I also enjoy the notations at the end. I was glad that you explained what a blazar was. I did not major in any of the science fields in college...but now I wish that I had :) I wish you continued success and will await the next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 19:08 PST
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A new chapter! Yay, Cawfeather! The balance imaging was very good. I liked it all, but now I need to go back and get all in context...Nexus to nexus/flux to flux,/ from nexus you were born,/ to flux you shall return,/ until all points converge/ into the great singularity/and all dharmas dance into the one. Svaha!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 13:25 PST
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You tell my old knees that seiza is a superior way of sitting! LOL. You can get little benches made if you're doing long sitting like this, like when you are doing shikentaza...anyway, saying hi to you and Cawfeather as you wend your way through editing...and I enjoy each and every rereading....
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Reviewed By: redroseonblacksatin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 03:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kove this story please keep going.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 19:49 PST
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I was talking about chapter 4. I think I forgot to mention that...LOL. Considering what else you updated....
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 19:34 PST
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Aha! revising the chapter that sent me off collecting books on Aikido and Iai and bushido techniques...along with a Bokken so I could walk through some of it to describe katas better when I write...the things Cawfeather does to people! Infects them! Makes them want to know more...hey wait! I'm beginning to sound like Miroku in this chapter..ack! Teijo in EIMH owes a lot to this chapter. So here is a verse: There once was a sword flashing bright/ That befuddled my brain with its light/Swirling and flashing/Got my brain a-gnashing/The image was love at first sight.
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 09:58 PST
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Oh, great lemon. I am really, really enjoying this fic. The writing is beautiful and the characterizations absolutely believable (never thought of Inu as being so -- angsty --but I am going with it.) As an old Trekkie, I'm having a little trouble incorporating the talk about the wormhole, Nexus, Time Lords etc. into my mental version of the IY universe -- I keep waiting for Captain Picard to show up (not that I'd mind if he did). At anyrate, I've been glued to this story since early this morning and can't wait to get back to it later (RL calls). Inspiring work all around, L_P!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 14:18 PDT
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MM.org is still not notifying me of updates on many of the fics listed in my favorites. Midoriko and Kikyou sure had their work cut out for them. I hope that last strategy worked. And I hope that Kagome has done the right thing. I couldn't tell who it was that Kanna had been speaking to. Oh my, Kagome thinks of herself as though she is another Naraku. When it looked as though the group would turn into eight, I had wondered if there would be some result that would give her the impression that she had become like Naraku. I had also wondered about Rin's abilities, whether or not she truly had any. I'm sure that she is Sesshoumaru's anchor and that anchor is outside of the parameters of the group. How can she be tied in without interrupting the balance? It's so confusing! I bet the bird could help(can't remember his name). It appears that things are coming together for the climactic end and I wonder what you have planned for the future state of the world. And I'm wondering if Souta took Kohaku with him. You have left so many questions! Gah! I feel a migraine coming on! LOL You always leave so many questions that the anticipation of yet another chapter keeps me on pins and needles! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 17:30 PDT
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I have the worst desire to write a Tolkien song parody in honor of this: The plot runs ever on and on, down from the mind where it began - now far ahead the plot has run, and I must follow if I can....What? Did I just say that....LOL..
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 11:49 PDT
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Mua ha ha ha! That was awesome! Plot device indeed!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 22:14 PDT
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Hehehe, 400 GET! Anyway, intense as always. Can sympathize with unexpected real life and writing issues. They suck when they hit and they usually hit at the most inopportune times. Welp, good luck with the rest of the story and don't worry just keep plugging away and you'll be fine.
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